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If I could write a love song then I would, Feelings I would compare to up above, As the two of us share what we both should, The essence of life is drowned in with love. No heart can retain its joy forever, Thus beauty bestowed on thee I can see, Our love shall live and die it will never, Without you, near me, love can never be. Though we are far apart and yet to meet, I hold in my heart the flame until then, Looking forward to the day we both greet, For destined we are to join once again. A soul on its journey until that day, When I can tell you my feelings this way.
2~2~2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/14/2017 7:23:00 AM
Good Morning White Wolf. You do the sonnet proud. I find this in perfect form voice and tone. The theme is timeless and your words are beautiful and touch the heart of the reader. Honestly. It was a pleasure to turn to this entry this morning. Well done
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White Wolf
Date: 3/14/2017 7:44:00 AM
It really does the heart good getting such positive feedback like this, and for that, I thank you deeply! Now I'm off to read some of yours! /|\
Date: 2/19/2017 3:10:00 PM
YET ANOTHER TOPFLIGHT SONNET!! Bravo, this is as true gem as well. A7
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White Wolf
Date: 3/14/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Robert! You are too kind /|\
Date: 2/3/2017 8:36:00 AM
A beautiful poetic song of love my friend. This one really sung to me as I read it. Very nicely done Rick.
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Date: 2/3/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Chris /|\
Date: 2/3/2017 2:42:00 AM
Perfect. Need I say more? Ok, I will. The rhythms are perfect. The rhymes are perfect. The sentiments are perfect. Only my jealousy is imperfect. JH
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Date: 2/3/2017 2:46:00 AM
Wow! What a compliment, I do enjoy the sonnet form! Thank you, John /|\
Date: 2/2/2017 11:57:00 PM
I love your sonnet, so tender and true :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/3/2017 12:02:00 AM
Lol, yes of course I am :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/3/2017 12:02:00 AM
So are you :P
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 11:58:00 PM
I see you're multi-tasking again my friend! Haha /|\

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