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Until That Day:

If I could write a love song then I would, Feelings I would compare to up above, As the two of us share what we both should, The essence of life is drowned in with love. No heart can retain its joy forever, Thus beauty bestowed on thee I can see, Our love shall live and die it will never, Without you, near me, love can never be. Though we are far apart and yet to meet, I hold in my heart the flame until then, Looking forward to the day we both greet, For destined we are to join once again. A soul on its journey until that day, When I can tell you my feelings this way.
2~2~2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ricci Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Good Morning White Wolf. You do the sonnet proud. I find this in perfect form voice and tone. The theme is timeless and your words are beautiful and touch the heart of the reader. Honestly. It was a pleasure to turn to this entry this morning. Well done
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:44 AM
It really does the heart good getting such positive feedback like this, and for that, I thank you deeply! Now I'm off to read some of yours! /|\
Lindley Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 3:10 PM
YET ANOTHER TOPFLIGHT SONNET!! Bravo, this is as true gem as well. A7
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Robert! You are too kind /|\
Green Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 8:36 AM
A beautiful poetic song of love my friend. This one really sung to me as I read it. Very nicely done Rick.
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Thank you, Chris /|\
Herlihy Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 2:42 AM
Perfect. Need I say more? Ok, I will. The rhythms are perfect. The rhymes are perfect. The sentiments are perfect. Only my jealousy is imperfect. JH
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Wow! What a compliment, I do enjoy the sonnet form! Thank you, John /|\
White Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 11:57 PM
I love your sonnet, so tender and true :)
White Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 12:02 AM
Lol, yes of course I am :)
White Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 12:02 AM
So are you :P
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 11:58 PM
I see you're multi-tasking again my friend! Haha /|\
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