Until Night's End

Though wrinkled veins line years on drooping arms        
I'll hold all springtime's traces of young vows,
To care for you through life’s devoted charms
And rouse our crowning milestones , joy endows
While tint of whitened hair enchants my heart--
That passing unto seasons now grows old,
Upon this dream's compass we have to part.
So sing dear one, our floral notes behold
As I guard you through one last winter rain,
Until once more sweet memories grip us
To cuddle laughter's beat and tunes again;
When petals fly with  traces of  caress.
 
…Before leaves of demise call us to rest;
We’ll share night's end upon heaven’s bequest.


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RHYMED, METERED poem Contest
Sponsor: Janice Canerdy   5/6/2017
Checked www.howmanysyllables.com
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Raina Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Beautifully written....congratulations on your win!
Krampe Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 8:38 PM
So glad to see this poem make an appearance again. Congrats on your placement. I still love it as much as when I first read it last year.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 2:29 PM
This is outstanding Nette! I love how you have equated the seasons with aging. Congratulations on a fine win! 7 ; )
Canerdy Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 10:22 AM
A 7 for your lovely, touching, WINNING poem, Nette. Thanks for entering my contest. Janice
Lawless Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Nette, I find the line "As I guard you through one last winter rain".. to be a brilliant pivotal point in this lovely sonnet. Lovers, protecting the core and depth of their loving as the dance draws to a close. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
Scars Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:30 PM
beautiful Nette for a beautiful lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Garcia Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Stunningly stirring. Beautiful beautiful!
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations Nette, beautifully done...
Krampe Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Such a beautiful and tender portrayal of aging. I love your imagery, Nette. Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win :-) this was beautiful ! Hugs
Lindley Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Just found this gem. I love me some sonnets my friend. This is tops in my book! A diamond shining in a bright sun! Bravoooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!
A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:48 PM
NETTE:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
Belcher Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations!
Relish Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Well written sonnet... congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Well penned sonnet, congrats on the win, nette
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Very beautiful Sonnet, Nette. Your lovely words echo what is in my heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win. 7 + Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Deschler Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 5:54 PM
These lines are very tender and they touched my heart deeply. This is how everyone should spend their last night on earth... A truly beautiful poem, Nette. Congrats on your first place win!
Sirak Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Now this is love, growing through the years and building on the original promise.
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 11:11 AM
So heartfelt and loving....I floated through this beautiful sonnet ....huggs
Vaso Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Absolutely beautiful, intriguing, love filled poem, I just love this style!
Richards Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:02 AM
The personalization in each line, captures the season's change of heart. Just loveliness!
Mara Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Supreme poem! What could be more fulfilling than being in the arms of a loved one until night's final end,
Leiser Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Masterfully written with great command of your pen, Nette! A 7 from me, for sure!
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Gracefully you have accented the aging years into something of beauty..I enjoyed reading Your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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