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Untethering Vastness

Such a warm vibrating rainbow I behold.. Detached from any willed feel I surrender.. An appealing energy illuminating the soul I radiate.. Waves of sweet sensitivity and tender tranquility Cradled.. A glorious green hand exuding a feel of peace and abundance Healed.. A sublime combination of alluring shades and rich hues Renewed.. Many a feel overpowering the self Nurtured.. Softly carried away to an untethering vastness Freed..

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Valsa George

Date: 12/7/2021 5:16:00 AM

I have read many poems on a rainbow, have written one or two myself. But never have I read a poem so unique on a rainbow..... as this. On reading this I feel being carried away to the boundless vastness, breaking all bondage. The peace and calmness it exudes lifts one to a mystical experience. May you get more time to pen more poems despite your onerous responsibilities . Love and blessings!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/11/2021 3:33:00 AM

A treat to read what you give of genuine care and interest in my humble poetry.. what you share of so rich a soul.. what you pour of Love.. Each single word conveys these and more.. I highly value what of precious effort, time and praise you grant me! Deeply humbled and so much elated and tremendously grateful to you, dear Valsa.. Thank you so much for your ongoing support and appreciation! Indeed, I am blessed with many worlds, my vocation and passion.. Sometimes they overlap.. other times one has the upper hand! And I am in between ever longing for the supremacy of poetry in my Life! So much is the pleasure talking to you.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

L. J. Carber

Date: 2/24/2021 7:16:00 AM

I suspect you may have the makings of a mystic, Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/24/2021 7:30:00 AM

It's the power and energy you get when you feel and merge into beauty! It is the language of the inside! Thank you so much L. J.! So kind of you to visit, read and respond! My deepest regards and blessings.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/5/2021 9:58:00 PM

In our obscurity, it is up to us...Loved.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/24/2021 1:52:00 AM

Sure! Insightful and great poet as you are, Pashang! Thank you so much for such an honour! My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/10/2021 10:27:00 AM

Dear Besma, I am so happy to see that you are writing again. I know how it feels when you have responsibilities to work but also love poetry. I am in the same predicament as you, we have had our small business for 35 years, and for the last 8 months I have neglected it, and our clients are disappointed I am not in contact with them, so now I divide my time between business and poetry - the business is our livelihood. I love your poem and have missed you incredibly. Hugs, blessing Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 9:46:00 AM

I'm always striving to be here on PS trying to keep up with so beautiful and wonderful poetry of dear friends and fellow poets! Always a great delight to read your kind and generous words soul sister.. I feel the beauty of your heart into your appreciative feedbacks! Thank you so much sweet Jenny for your shining presence and sincerity! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs. Stay safe.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/8/2021 5:58:00 AM

Your words shine in the beautiful images you created. Enjoyed the journey through nature. Excellent write, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 9:40:00 AM

How I miss a healing journey through Nature! So beautiful and encouraging is your feedback! Always a great pleasure to read your highly appreciated words of praise! Thank you so much dear Vijay. My deepest regards and blessings. Stay safe.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/8/2021 5:13:00 AM

A wonder of his creation that I never get tired of seeing Besma. A deep and thought provoking verse. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 9:37:00 AM

My great pleasure, Tom.. thank you so much for so uplifting a presence and support. My deepest regards and blessings. Stay safe.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/8/2021 2:31:00 AM

Oh how I love rainbows. It is a peaceful sign to remind us of His greatness. Those who accept it will find peace. A lovely poem, Besma. Glad I saw two poems from you. Blessings. ~~

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/17/2021 9:35:00 AM

Now we need all the rainbows to colour, cheer and heal our souls.. thank you so much, Victor for your generosity and ongoing support.. My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings. Stay safe.