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Untethered Desires

If wishes could quench my thirst for you I would be eternally drunk on requests. My hunger well-sated by ardent feasting upon a banquet of untethered desires. 11/30/20 ~ Liberum Divisa 3 Sponsor: Greg Barden Original poem: 'When your Eyes Meet Mine'

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John Watt
Date: 2/19/2021 12:12:00 PM
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Such emotions in this poem of longing. Congrats for your win with Greg!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2021 2:10:00 PM
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Jenna, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 2/17/2021 9:33:00 PM
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Beautiful lines... and an amazing title dear Jenna. Congrats on your win. Hugs ~ Ani
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2021 8:47:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Wonderful. Have a blessed day...............
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:27:00 AM
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Thank you, Paula.
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Jcb Brul
Date: 2/17/2021 6:57:00 AM
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Congratulations Jenna..A splendid piece!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:27:00 AM
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Thank you, JCB.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 6:52:00 AM
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Passionate winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:27:00 AM
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Thanks, Sara.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/17/2021 6:41:00 AM
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bravo ~ beautiful, Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:26:00 AM
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Thanks, Line.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/17/2021 6:10:00 AM
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Niiice Jenna! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:26:00 AM
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Thanks, Linda.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 5:02:00 AM
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Ooh, Jenna! Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:25:00 AM
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Thank you, Kim
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Carol Mitra
Date: 2/17/2021 4:56:00 AM
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Such an amazing write....Congrats on your win Jenna :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/17/2021 11:25:00 AM
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Thank you, Carol
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/3/2020 4:35:00 AM
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Great choice indeed! Good luck with a top win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/4/2020 7:23:00 AM
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Thanks, Mark.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/30/2020 10:25:00 AM
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A stanza that can stand alone Jenna, Excellent choice for Gregs contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/30/2020 11:50:00 AM
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Thank you, Tom. I don't have a trunk full of free verses from which to choose.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2020 8:13:00 AM
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This banquet of ardent feasting sounds like a magical moment. Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/30/2020 11:50:00 AM
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Thank you for the wish of luck, John.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 11/30/2020 7:07:00 AM
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Gorgeous. Love it. God bless you with a win :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/30/2020 11:48:00 AM
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Thanks a lot, Gina.
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Silent One
Date: 11/30/2020 5:24:00 AM
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that is a lot of wishes of desire... Sensual four lines...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/30/2020 11:48:00 AM
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Lots of sweet treats. Thank you.

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