Jenna Logan Poet Free verse

Untethered Desires

If wishes could quench my thirst for you
  I would be eternally drunk on requests.
My hunger well-sated by ardent feasting 
  upon a banquet of untethered desires.




11/30/20 ~ Liberum Divisa 3
     Sponsor: Greg Barden
Original poem: 'When your Eyes Meet Mine'

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John Watt February 19, 2021 at 12:12 PM Such emotions in this poem of longing. Congrats for your win with Greg!

Constance La France February 18, 2021 at 2:10 PM Jenna, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:33 PM Beautiful lines... and an amazing title dear Jenna. Congrats on your win. Hugs ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2021 at 8:47 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Wonderful. Have a blessed day............... Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:27 AM Thank you, Paula.

JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:57 AM Congratulations Jenna..A splendid piece! Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:27 AM Thank you, JCB.

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 6:52 AM Passionate winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:27 AM Thanks, Sara.

Line Gauthier February 17, 2021 at 6:41 AM bravo ~ beautiful, Jenna Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:26 AM Thanks, Line.

Linda Alice Fowler February 17, 2021 at 6:10 AM Niiice Jenna! Congratulations on the win! Linda Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:26 AM Thanks, Linda.

Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 5:02 AM Ooh, Jenna! Congratulations! Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thank you, Kim

Carol Mitra February 17, 2021 at 4:56 AM Such an amazing write....Congrats on your win Jenna :) Jenna Logan February 17, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thank you, Carol

Mark Koplin December 3, 2020 at 4:35 AM Great choice indeed! Good luck with a top win! Jenna Logan December 4, 2020 at 7:23 AM Thanks, Mark.

Tom Cunningham November 30, 2020 at 10:25 AM A stanza that can stand alone Jenna, Excellent choice for Gregs contest. Tom Jenna Logan November 30, 2020 at 11:50 AM Thank you, Tom. I don't have a trunk full of free verses from which to choose.

John Gondolf November 30, 2020 at 8:13 AM This banquet of ardent feasting sounds like a magical moment. Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs. Jenna Logan November 30, 2020 at 11:50 AM Thank you for the wish of luck, John.

Regina Mcintosh November 30, 2020 at 7:07 AM Gorgeous. Love it. God bless you with a win :) Jenna Logan November 30, 2020 at 11:48 AM Thanks a lot, Gina.

Silent One November 30, 2020 at 5:24 AM that is a lot of wishes of desire... Sensual four lines... Jenna Logan November 30, 2020 at 11:48 AM Lots of sweet treats. Thank you.