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Untamed Attraction

I cannot help feeling the way that I feel
or doing the things that I do;
acting the way I'm not supposed to.
For I have not the discipline to do so.

Your presence is powerful, and intense..
it overwhelms me completely
and takes control of me.
For that moment, it's an eternity.

I am rendered helpless..
in a state of mind in which I cannot think
clearly, nor focus or believe
in anything other than you.

Everything that I have learned.
Everything that I have built myself upon
has vanished. No rules or religion can
deter me to think otherwise.

I am at your mercy, 
whether your intent was to do so or not;
it's how I feel, and it's how I am
when I'm with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/2/2016 3:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Alvin. Lainey
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/5/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 12/1/2016 8:46:00 AM
Hi Alvin, Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the"Creep" contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/5/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 11/22/2016 10:10:00 PM
Your heart is like mine. Feeling so overwhelming. I know all about this, never ending pain/joy. Thanks for sharing.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 11/23/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Joseph... I remember the feeling lasted for a few days, which was enough to inspire me to write this.