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Untamed Attraction

I cannot help feeling the way that I feel or doing the things that I do; acting the way I'm not supposed to. For I have not the discipline to do so. Your presence is powerful, and intense.. it overwhelms me completely and takes control of me. For that moment, it's an eternity. I am rendered helpless.. in a state of mind in which I cannot think clearly, nor focus or believe in anything other than you. Everything that I have learned. Everything that I have built myself upon has vanished. No rules or religion can deter me to think otherwise. I am at your mercy, whether your intent was to do so or not; it's how I feel, and it's how I am when I'm with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/31/2023 5:38:00 PM
I thought being Obscessed was hard…Overwhelmed is… pverwhelming! Haha! Soperb work! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/21/2022 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win. Smitten! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/20/2022 5:16:00 AM
I am at your mercy - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2016 3:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Alvin. Lainey
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/5/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 12/1/2016 8:46:00 AM
Hi Alvin, Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the"Creep" contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/5/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 11/22/2016 10:10:00 PM
Your heart is like mine. Feeling so overwhelming. I know all about this, never ending pain/joy. Thanks for sharing.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 11/23/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Joseph... I remember the feeling lasted for a few days, which was enough to inspire me to write this.

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