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Untamable Silent Slumber Under the sunset, as it melts away into the twilight favor Swept away into the cave’s hypnotic pool of emerald green Obedient to the graceful rhythm of the growing waves Bridge of vague shadow, wavers yesterday’s light scene Falling limp, eager to surrender, in the harmonic roll of the undertow Drawn to a knoll of grass and leaves that crunch under the weight of our souls Cocooned in a state of consciousness, untamable silent slumber, reborn a butterfly Forever residing in the unattainable exotic futures control Open to a moment of silence time of the universe Splendor eternal, coiling through the deepest parts of unbounded mind Myrrh sweetness taking my breath away feeling alive Lyrics, verses, and melodies of dreams unwind 4/6/2016

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Date: 8/26/2016 6:25:00 PM
Beautiful, Eve. The imagery and metaphors are so poetic. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/26/2016 3:38:00 PM
Such amazingly beautiful imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:08:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve it was wonderful to read this again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/26/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much like you I am very honored on my win. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/26/2016 10:36:00 AM
Eve! You carried one of the best flows I have ever read on PS...beautiful and revealing lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/26/2016 10:56:00 AM
I am very honored, Laura, thank you. :) Hugs Eve
Date: 5/8/2016 9:14:00 PM
wow and wow, amazing, congratulations on your win in the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/26/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings.
Date: 5/8/2016 6:15:00 PM
Eve, WOW, the picture above is spectacular. :) Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
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Date: 4/8/2016 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Eve...very nicely penned...
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Date: 4/8/2016 12:57:00 PM
The image and your poem took my breath away Eve - absolutely stunning:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2016 12:46:00 PM
you paint a splash of impressionistic tones so well rendered, eve!..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, it means a lot.... Hugs dear friend

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