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Untamable Silent Slumber

Untamable Silent Slumber Under the sunset, as it melts away into the twilight favor Swept away into the cave’s hypnotic pool of emerald green Obedient to the graceful rhythm of the growing waves Bridge of vague shadow, wavers yesterday’s light scene Falling limp, eager to surrender, in the harmonic roll of the undertow Drawn to a knoll of grass and leaves that crunch under the weight of our souls Cocooned in a state of consciousness, untamable silent slumber, reborn a butterfly Forever residing in the unattainable exotic futures control Open to a moment of silence time of the universe Splendor eternal, coiling through the deepest parts of unbounded mind Myrrh sweetness taking my breath away feeling alive Lyrics, verses, and melodies of dreams unwind 4/6/2016
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Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Beautiful, Eve. The imagery and metaphors are so poetic. Congratulations.
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Such amazingly beautiful imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve it was wonderful to read this again:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Thank you so much like you I am very honored on my win. Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Eve! You carried one of the best flows I have ever read on PS...beautiful and revealing lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:56 AM
I am very honored, Laura, thank you. :) Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 9:14 PM
wow and wow, amazing, congratulations on your win in the contest
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings.
A  Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Eve, WOW, the picture above is spectacular. :) Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
May Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Beautiful imagery Eve...very nicely penned...
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:57 PM
The image and your poem took my breath away Eve - absolutely stunning:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 12:46 PM
you paint a splash of impressionistic tones so well rendered, eve!..huggs
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Thank you, Nette, it means a lot.... Hugs dear friend
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