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Unsure of Cell or Shore: Version 2

We made our padded rooms,
Trampoline parks for a time,
For bouncing off the walls,
As we crash into the side.

Those clouds our leather breakers,
Eroding rolling rows,
Salty tongues to a gobstopper ball,
Cancelling the storm.

Strapped into a jacket,
A hopping biped fowl,
From pterosaur to Christmas baste
Skin golden crisped to taste.

Thrown off the pier a flip,
Does blind the inner ear,
To up or down, or sand or air,
Our skull: the barycentre sphere.

Clouds overhang again,
Dangled down on unseen strings
A sea of puppets bobbing,
On white lip crests of sea.

Thrown like a bottled ship,
Lab foetus in a jar,
My pickled skin, burned crisp like chicharrón,
A whole communion of my form.

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Date: 8/22/2025 6:19:00 PM
I followed you right away after reading this. What a gifted writer,
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Alice Reynolds
Date: 8/22/2025 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! That's very kind :D

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