Unsure

Sometimes l am unsure~ Unsure of self Unsure of purpose Unsure of life Unsure of many things However, I am sure ~ These uncertainties Will pass As the sun rises And a new day dawns

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/29/2023 12:19:00 AM

Hi Deb, are you ok my friend? Glad your your second stanza sounds somewhat more positive, love and hugs to you, Jennifer.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/20/2023 8:08:00 PM

Sure does, Deb XX

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/19/2023 3:04:00 PM

I appreciate the juxtaposition you created -- certainty vs. uncertainty. Brillliantly said! have a great evening, Sara

Deb M
Date: 11/19/2023 3:06:00 PM

The “what” Sara haha?!? I need to look that word up but lm guessing its a good thing hehe! Always a pleasure…..Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/19/2023 5:40:00 AM

For sure! Much inspiration in your second stanza, my friend.

Deb M
Date: 11/19/2023 5:45:00 AM

Thankyou dear Vijay! Debx

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/19/2023 4:21:00 AM

Great positive outlook, Deb. At the moment Im unsure if I want bacon and eggs or biscuits and gravy. Surely I can figure it out before lunchtime:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/19/2023 6:32:00 AM

LOL Perhaps you should google it. There will be photos. However, it's not all about looks. It all depends on how one makes them.

Deb M
Date: 11/19/2023 4:29:00 AM

Hehe you make me smile….what is biscuits and gravy? Sweet biscuits with hot gravy? Debx