Judith S Poet Quatrain

Unsung Heroes

What now of heroes can I speak
Who raise the mild and loft the meek
Bequeathing glory, love untold
With ne’re a thought their heart unfolds

A spirit bright so kind are they
Their own life’s pain they hide away
Their selfless gifts cast near and far
They’ll hand you moons and cast you stars

In what choice god you do believe
He’s planted in them kindness seeds
With selfless stealth they will achieve
To garnish souls with ruby beads

Intentions oft misunderstood
They only know how to do good
Altruistic warrior hearts
Empathy is their unique art

Incognito these ones remain
Actions speaking louder than fame
Gifted with words to comfort pain
Casting rainbows, banishing rain

Unsung heroes they will remain
Singing their songs without refrain
Broken angels with hidden wings
Healing souls whilst weaving heart strings.


November 26, 2017
Written for  “Hero” Contest
Sponsored by:  Silent One

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Richard Evans January 2, 2018 at 8:47 PM I found this line exceptional "They’ll hand you moons and cast you stars." Good poem. Judith S January 3, 2018 at 5:03 AM Thank you Richard!! I appreciate you reading it :) Best, Judy

John Hamilton December 9, 2017 at 9:43 PM I see congrats are in order, what a perfect accompaniment to the violin piece, both wondrous in their unity and message, way to go Judy this is so well done!! Judith S December 10, 2017 at 5:32 PM Thank you SO MUCH John Hamilton! This means a lot coming from you!! Thank you :) Best, Judy

Gregory Richard Barden December 9, 2017 at 4:58 PM Congratulations on your win, Judy - well-done, my friend! :-) <3 Judith S December 10, 2017 at 5:31 PM Thank you Greg!!

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 30, 2017 at 1:27 PM Wonderful poem, Judith ... so flowing are the rhymes! This loving poem just keeps building the intensity. A gem of a poem by a special pen. Aurora bright write. Love and smiles always. Judith S December 1, 2017 at 7:29 PM Awh ... thank you Freddie for your very kind comments!! I always appreciate you visiting :) ~ Judy

Janis Medders Tobechi November 28, 2017 at 6:09 PM Congratulations on your win. Judith S November 28, 2017 at 6:43 PM Thank you Janis for stopping by to read :) Best, Judy

Eve Roper November 28, 2017 at 3:30 PM Awe beautiful write, Judith, ... congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Judith S November 28, 2017 at 6:42 PM Thank you my friend :) Best, Judy

Connie Marcum Wong November 28, 2017 at 2:55 PM I really love your outstanding poem Judith! This poem is tops with me and I am faving it! Congratulations on your well deserved top placement! : ) Judith S November 28, 2017 at 6:40 PM Thank you SO much Connie! I appreciate your very kind comments ... and the visit. Best, Judy

Vijay Pandit November 28, 2017 at 1:15 PM Returning with congrats--well done, Judy! Judith S November 28, 2017 at 6:37 PM Thank you Vijay!

Isor Chand November 28, 2017 at 11:42 AM Infinities with words ... Congrats .. Judith S November 28, 2017 at 6:37 PM Thank you Isor!

Susan Ashley November 28, 2017 at 9:40 AM Returning with congratulations Judy for your winning placement in the contest with this beautifully written poem. Warmest wishes.. Judith S November 28, 2017 at 11:07 AM Thank you Susan!!

Silent One November 28, 2017 at 9:14 AM The last stanza is amazing.. There are so many unsung heroes that roam amongst us that go about daily helping others and expecting nothing in return.. Loved your take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Judith S November 28, 2017 at 9:28 AM I'm completely honored!!!!!!! Thank you so much for your consideration Silent One!

John Gondolf November 28, 2017 at 5:29 AM This rhythm of this poem flows so smoothly, nicely done, Judy. Many times we have people like this around us in our lives, and we take them for granted and never thank them. John Judith S November 28, 2017 at 8:57 AM Thank you so much for your kind comments John. These type of people are never looking for accolades. They quietly bolster our spirits and our souls often at the expense of their own. I agree with you. Many are taken for granted. :) Best, Judy

Maria Williams November 28, 2017 at 4:51 AM This is a beautiful poem Judith, the unsung heroes,incognito, the empathic ones who unselfishly give up their time, never wanting anything in return. The real heroes. You nailed it, in this awesome write. I see a Winner here already, but good luck anyway...Maria xxx Judith S November 28, 2017 at 5:06 AM Thank you so much Maria for your very kind comments! I am so fortunate to know a few of these people in my life and it seemed an easy choice to me to recognize them when speaking of heroes. Appreciate you stopping by ;) ~ Judy

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2017 at 4:54 PM This should be a song! Judith S November 28, 2017 at 5:01 AM Thanks for reading Richard! I wish I could write music :) ~Judy

Lewis Raynes November 27, 2017 at 4:45 PM I love the second last stanza, you nailed it, great write Judith Judith S November 28, 2017 at 5:00 AM Thank you Lewis. I appreciate you stopping by to read :) ~ Judy

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2017 at 3:47 PM IF not for them, we would be nothing. You chose very wisely for your hero theme! Judith S November 27, 2017 at 4:35 PM Thank you Andrea! I always appreciate you stopping by to read :) ~ Judy

Winged Warrior November 27, 2017 at 5:55 AM Well crafted my friend...best of luck...but I might smell a winner here...god bless...^WW^ Judith S November 27, 2017 at 4:33 PM Thank you so much WW!! Appreciate your vote of confidence :) ~ Judy

Susan Ashley November 26, 2017 at 7:44 PM Such a beautiful and soulful write Judy. Really lovely imagery with wondrously poetic lines. Shining poetry throughout, your last stanza really sparkles. Good luck in the contest! Judith S November 27, 2017 at 4:32 PM Thank you so much Susan! Your comments always uplift my spirits and mean so much to me! ~ Judy

Vijay Pandit November 26, 2017 at 8:41 AM An awesome depiction of heroes, Judy--a well written poem flows with rhythm--best for a win! Judith S November 26, 2017 at 8:47 AM Thank you so much Vijay! Best, Judy