Unsung Heroes

What now of heroes can I speak Who raise the mild and loft the meek Bequeathing glory, love untold With ne’re a thought their heart unfolds A spirit bright so kind are they Their own life’s pain they hide away Their selfless gifts cast near and far They’ll hand you moons and cast you stars In what choice god you do believe He’s planted in them kindness seeds With selfless stealth they will achieve To garnish souls with ruby beads Intentions oft misunderstood They only know how to do good Altruistic warrior hearts Empathy is their unique art Incognito these ones remain Actions speaking louder than fame Gifted with words to comfort pain Casting rainbows, banishing rain Unsung heroes they will remain Singing their songs without refrain Broken angels with hidden wings Healing souls whilst weaving heart strings. November 26, 2017 Written for “Hero” Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Ricky Muse

Date: 1/2/2018 8:47:00 PM

I found this line exceptional "They’ll hand you moons and cast you stars." Good poem.

Judith S
Date: 1/3/2018 5:03:00 AM

Thank you Richard!! I appreciate you reading it :) Best, Judy

John Hamilton

Date: 12/9/2017 9:43:00 PM

I see congrats are in order, what a perfect accompaniment to the violin piece, both wondrous in their unity and message, way to go Judy this is so well done!!

Judith S
Date: 12/10/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thank you SO MUCH John Hamilton! This means a lot coming from you!! Thank you :) Best, Judy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/9/2017 4:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Judy - well-done, my friend! :-) <3

Judith S
Date: 12/10/2017 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Greg!!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/30/2017 1:27:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Judith ... so flowing are the rhymes! This loving poem just keeps building the intensity. A gem of a poem by a special pen. Aurora bright write. Love and smiles always.

Judith S
Date: 12/1/2017 7:29:00 PM

Awh ... thank you Freddie for your very kind comments!! I always appreciate you visiting :) ~ Judy

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 11/28/2017 6:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Janis for stopping by to read :) Best, Judy

Eve Roper

Date: 11/28/2017 3:30:00 PM

Awe beautiful write, Judith, ... congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 6:42:00 PM

Thank you my friend :) Best, Judy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/28/2017 2:55:00 PM

I really love your outstanding poem Judith! This poem is tops with me and I am faving it! Congratulations on your well deserved top placement! : )

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 6:40:00 PM

Thank you SO much Connie! I appreciate your very kind comments ... and the visit. Best, Judy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2017 1:15:00 PM

Returning with congrats--well done, Judy!

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Vijay!

Isor Chand

Date: 11/28/2017 11:42:00 AM

Infinities with words ... Congrats ..

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Isor!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/28/2017 9:40:00 AM

Returning with congratulations Judy for your winning placement in the contest with this beautifully written poem. Warmest wishes..

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Susan!!

Silent One

Date: 11/28/2017 9:14:00 AM

The last stanza is amazing.. There are so many unsung heroes that roam amongst us that go about daily helping others and expecting nothing in return.. Loved your take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 9:28:00 AM

I'm completely honored!!!!!!! Thank you so much for your consideration Silent One!

John Gondolf

Date: 11/28/2017 5:29:00 AM

This rhythm of this poem flows so smoothly, nicely done, Judy. Many times we have people like this around us in our lives, and we take them for granted and never thank them. John

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 8:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments John. These type of people are never looking for accolades. They quietly bolster our spirits and our souls often at the expense of their own. I agree with you. Many are taken for granted. :) Best, Judy

Maria Williams

Date: 11/28/2017 4:51:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem Judith, the unsung heroes,incognito, the empathic ones who unselfishly give up their time, never wanting anything in return. The real heroes. You nailed it, in this awesome write. I see a Winner here already, but good luck anyway...Maria xxx

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 5:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Maria for your very kind comments! I am so fortunate to know a few of these people in my life and it seemed an easy choice to me to recognize them when speaking of heroes. Appreciate you stopping by ;) ~ Judy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2017 4:54:00 PM

This should be a song!

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 5:01:00 AM

Thanks for reading Richard! I wish I could write music :) ~Judy

Lewis Raynes

Date: 11/27/2017 4:45:00 PM

I love the second last stanza, you nailed it, great write Judith

Judith S
Date: 11/28/2017 5:00:00 AM

Thank you Lewis. I appreciate you stopping by to read :) ~ Judy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2017 3:47:00 PM

IF not for them, we would be nothing. You chose very wisely for your hero theme!

Judith S
Date: 11/27/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! I always appreciate you stopping by to read :) ~ Judy

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/27/2017 5:55:00 AM

Well crafted my friend...best of luck...but I might smell a winner here...god bless...^WW^

Judith S
Date: 11/27/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you so much WW!! Appreciate your vote of confidence :) ~ Judy

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/26/2017 7:44:00 PM

Such a beautiful and soulful write Judy. Really lovely imagery with wondrously poetic lines. Shining poetry throughout, your last stanza really sparkles. Good luck in the contest!

Judith S
Date: 11/27/2017 4:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan! Your comments always uplift my spirits and mean so much to me! ~ Judy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/26/2017 8:41:00 AM

An awesome depiction of heroes, Judy--a well written poem flows with rhythm--best for a win!

Judith S
Date: 11/26/2017 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay! Best, Judy