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Unstrung

John was a boy who loved to whittle. One day he made himself a fiddle. It produced a bad sound The worst to be found. Forcing John to decide to whittle little.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/2/2015 10:06:00 PM
Thanks for the stop by, Paul. But my limerick is not "genius." Nothing I write is. However, I did enjoy writing this one. Your Unstrung is just as good as the one I read earlier. Keep at it. / M
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/28/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice. Sorry to be tardy in responding (computer gremlins are partly to blame together with the wages of age).
Date: 1/30/2015 10:21:00 AM
love the humour and the tongue twister in the final line lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/30/2015 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your kinds words are, to me, a 21st Century Balm of Gilead.
Date: 1/30/2015 8:03:00 AM
Eh poor John>rajat
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/30/2015 9:03:00 AM
I'm confident that John appreciates your sympathy. Thanks for commenting.

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