Unspoken

unspoken sounds of silence scream in cacophonous onslaughts again and again ©deborah burch 2.17.2013

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Rockman Pritts

Date: 3/2/2013 2:15:00 AM

An excellent three lines using intellectual and visual vernacular. I think I would have used, "Cacophonous Onslaughts" as the title though. But that's just me. Thanks for another thought provoking read. Rockman

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/27/2013 10:42:00 AM

Hi debs at it again with another good one luv xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/23/2013 7:25:00 AM

Hey Cap't Deb! Reminds me of Simon & Garfunkel's "Sounds of Silence" which is one of the classics! Nice! Hugs, Jack xox

Deborah Burch
Date: 2/23/2013 2:53:00 PM

Awwww. Thank you Jack! An honour to be included in a thought among such astounding writers as they!! Big Huggss love cap'n deb