Unspoken

she met him online, dreamt of his kiss on the date she declined, his lipstick too bold Dec 2, 2019 Hit me with an Epi-Pen Poetry Contest Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy

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Running Wolves

Date: 12/5/2019 5:24:00 AM

Oh my don't know if I should laugh, oh heck Bwahahahaha. Did not expect that ending...lol

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:03:00 AM

lol, glad it made you giggle... thanks for the visit and comment... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 5:12:00 AM

Wonderfully done my friend. Good luck in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/4/2019 1:47:00 PM

- Love it, Sandra :))) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/4/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much ... glad you enjoyed it :) hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 12/4/2019 12:10:00 PM

Love your sense of humor, Sandy, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/4/2019 12:40:00 PM

Thank you so much John. Hugs :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/3/2019 11:32:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Lol! In a few words you said a lot .Reality didn't match what she dreamed about. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/4/2019 12:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis. You see a lot in my line of work that kind of made this one easy to think of :) hugs

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/3/2019 8:26:00 AM

Great lines Sandra!!! At the bottom I noticed the name of the contest you wrote this for; though I am allergic to bee stings, I've never had to epi pin myself. But it's wonderful to read in your poem how this would really feel. Thanks Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/3/2019 9:22:00 AM

Thanks Jeff...i have had to give an epi-pen injection to a friend...it's a shock to the system for sure...

Bette Bavington

Date: 12/3/2019 7:52:00 AM

Never believe what you see or hear on line. It is Always in your best interest to check it out no matter how good it sounds. Nicely done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/3/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Bette...i totally agree... :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 12/2/2019 9:35:00 PM

; ) Witty chick :) hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/3/2019 5:09:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2019 6:17:00 PM

hahaha. I had to think about that for a second!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/2/2019 8:31:00 PM

lol...glad i could make you think and laugh at the same time :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/2/2019 3:55:00 PM

That would do it ;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/2/2019 4:22:00 PM

lol thanks...this came to me out of nowhere but am sure i have seen a similar scene here or there... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2019 3:31:00 PM

Don't blame her for declining-- a fun read, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/2/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thank you my friend... this just came to me... though i do work around kids and have had seen some in drag already, so maybe it was something i saw and it just came to light now... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/2/2019 2:46:00 PM

What, you didn't like Crimson Magnolia Sunblaze? :) Really funny my friend. Here's another I won't win. : )

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/2/2019 2:48:00 PM

lol, i don't know where this one came from, but i won't win either, it's one of those premium only 10 winner contests... Thank you for making me laugh... hugs :)