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Unspeakable Love

Tears tremble, threatening, on my lowered lashes My heartbeat hesitates, then bounds with jubilant joy His earnest embrace evokes such erotic emotions Then so swiftly swept to unbelievable union Now I drift, dreaming of unspeakable, lasting love

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Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2011 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's Contest, Barb. Love, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 4:43:00 PM

Hey Barbara, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place win. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 3:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:48:00 PM

I see that the judge loved the alliteration of these lovely wininers. You wrote a wonderful example of just such type of poetry. COngratulations.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/26/2011 7:41:00 PM

Such wonderful lasting emotions. many hearty congrats for this victory.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2011 11:39:00 AM

Congrats BG on your big win in the Unspeakable Love contest with another awesome entry myf riend.. enjoy with luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2011 10:31:00 AM

An amazing Alliteration!Congrats Barbara on your big win in this contest---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/26/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Adeleke, Barbara

Julie Heckman

Date: 2/26/2011 9:37:00 AM

lovely...Love the silence Julie

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 2/26/2011 9:11:00 AM

Wow Babara ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your 3rd place win in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/24/2011 5:48:00 PM

This looks like another great expression style. I will have to try it sooner or later. Your work is once again quite admirable.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/22/2011 4:38:00 AM

Very passionate picture of a lasting love, Barbara, nicely written!....Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2011 12:55:00 AM

Most passionate one I think I have read. All these "feeling" little poems are leaving my limerick in the dust! Luv, Andrea

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/19/2011 9:04:00 PM

An awesome alliteration. The second line is super intense...a hesitating heartbeat and bounding with jubilant joy.. great words to describe an overly excited heart!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2011 4:01:00 PM

In relationships, emotions run the gamut, dear LNC. You went from tears to joy to passion and finally landed on dreams of lasting love. That's what we all want and I hope you find it. My meeting in St. Augustine had to be postponed until tomorrow because my bathroom renovations took longer than expected. A full report will be sent your way. Best wishes in the unspeakable love contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2011 6:05:00 AM

GREAT alliteration BG and a wonderful exciting entry for Adeleke's contest too.. terrific words to tempt the reader luv..good luck...