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Unspeakable Love

Tears tremble, threatening, on my lowered lashes
My heartbeat hesitates, then bounds with jubilant joy
His earnest embrace evokes such erotic emotions
Then so swiftly swept to unbelievable union
Now I drift, dreaming of unspeakable,  lasting love
 

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2011

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Audrey Haick Date: 3/3/2011 1:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's Contest, Barb. Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/28/2011 11:54:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Barbara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/27/2011 4:43:00 PM Hey Barbara, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/27/2011 3:42:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2011 11:48:00 PM I see that the judge loved the alliteration of these lovely wininers. You wrote a wonderful example of just such type of poetry. COngratulations. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 2/26/2011 7:41:00 PM Such wonderful lasting emotions. many hearty congrats for this victory. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/26/2011 11:39:00 AM Congrats BG on your big win in the Unspeakable Love contest with another awesome entry myf riend.. enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/26/2011 10:31:00 AM An amazing Alliteration!Congrats Barbara on your big win in this contest---kashinath Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/26/2011 10:26:00 AM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Adeleke, Barbara Login to Reply

Julie Heckman Date: 2/26/2011 9:37:00 AM lovely...Love the silence Julie Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 2/26/2011 9:11:00 AM Wow Babara ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your 3rd place win in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/24/2011 5:48:00 PM This looks like another great expression style. I will have to try it sooner or later. Your work is once again quite admirable. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 2/22/2011 4:38:00 AM Very passionate picture of a lasting love, Barbara, nicely written!....Gert Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/20/2011 12:55:00 AM Most passionate one I think I have read. All these "feeling" little poems are leaving my limerick in the dust! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/19/2011 9:04:00 PM An awesome alliteration. The second line is super intense...a hesitating heartbeat and bounding with jubilant joy.. great words to describe an overly excited heart! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/19/2011 4:01:00 PM In relationships, emotions run the gamut, dear LNC. You went from tears to joy to passion and finally landed on dreams of lasting love. That's what we all want and I hope you find it. My meeting in St. Augustine had to be postponed until tomorrow because my bathroom renovations took longer than expected. A full report will be sent your way. Best wishes in the unspeakable love contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/19/2011 6:05:00 AM GREAT alliteration BG and a wonderful exciting entry for Adeleke's contest too.. terrific words to tempt the reader luv..good luck... Login to Reply