Unspeakable Love

Tears tremble, threatening, on my lowered lashes My heartbeat hesitates, then bounds with jubilant joy His earnest embrace evokes such erotic emotions Then so swiftly swept to unbelievable union Now I drift, dreaming of unspeakable, lasting love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's Contest, Barb. Love, Annalise
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:43 PM
Hey Barbara, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place win. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:48 PM
I see that the judge loved the alliteration of these lovely wininers. You wrote a wonderful example of just such type of poetry. COngratulations.
Mannan Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:41 PM
Such wonderful lasting emotions. many hearty congrats for this victory.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:39 AM
Congrats BG on your big win in the Unspeakable Love contest with another awesome entry myf riend.. enjoy with luv..
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:31 AM
An amazing Alliteration!Congrats Barbara on your big win in this contest---kashinath
Mehta Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Adeleke, Barbara
Heckman Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:37 AM
lovely...Love the silence Julie
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February 26, 2011 at 9:11 AM
Wow Babara ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your 3rd place win in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
Pettit Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 5:48 PM
This looks like another great expression style. I will have to try it sooner or later. Your work is once again quite admirable.
Knop Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Very passionate picture of a lasting love, Barbara, nicely written!....Gert
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 12:55 AM
Most passionate one I think I have read. All these "feeling" little poems are leaving my limerick in the dust! Luv, Andrea
Song Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 9:04 PM
An awesome alliteration. The second line is super intense...a hesitating heartbeat and bounding with jubilant joy.. great words to describe an overly excited heart!
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February 19, 2011 at 4:01 PM
In relationships, emotions run the gamut, dear LNC. You went from tears to joy to passion and finally landed on dreams of lasting love. That's what we all want and I hope you find it. My meeting in St. Augustine had to be postponed until tomorrow because my bathroom renovations took longer than expected. A full report will be sent your way. Best wishes in the unspeakable love contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 6:05 AM
GREAT alliteration BG and a wonderful exciting entry for Adeleke's contest too.. terrific words to tempt the reader luv..good luck...
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