Unspeakable Love

Your smile firm raises walls on my peace.
Times we gave up return without cease,
   Nights we chose to forget
   Are gasping for a breath
Neath pilows wet from sweat, tears and a kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Nice write on the theme of the contest, valeria
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:12 PM
I like the rhyme of kiss with peace and cease. It shows a cute accent! A passionate limerick there!
Poet Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Nice Limerick---enjoyed------kashinath
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Good limerick. It contains decent descriptiveness and rhyme.
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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