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Unspeakable Love

Your smile firm raises walls on my peace. Times we gave up return without cease, Nights we chose to forget Are gasping for a breath Neath pilows wet from sweat, tears and a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 6:43:00 PM
Nice write on the theme of the contest, valeria
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:12:00 PM
I like the rhyme of kiss with peace and cease. It shows a cute accent! A passionate limerick there!
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:23:00 PM
Nice Limerick---enjoyed------kashinath
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:48:00 PM
Good limerick. It contains decent descriptiveness and rhyme.
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:32:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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