8/20/2022
Poetry form: Lyric
A sauté of unsolicited advice with a dash of fun. All we're trying to do is get rid of the bitterness and make the rest of the flavors pop. Yummy!
Unsolicited advice against its storm I brace Showing no fear or shame as they get up in my face In other words ... They tell me to zig when I'm zagging "Hurry up man!" when I'm lagging "That's not the way I'd do it!" they opine "Better listen to me, get to it!" every time Hmm, if that's true then I'll know just what to do when I am you! More precisely ... When I do what you say in my own peculiar way You stand beaming with pride taking credit If I dare to complain you declare me insane then expose me to ridicule on Reddit (You don't regret it— there, I've said it!) Now I had my say what will you do? Hopefully MYOB not misconstrue "We just told you the best way to go You must listen to us don’t you know?” Thanks! If that's true then I'll know just what to do when I am you! As odd as that sounds it must be true I'll be doing sooo much better when I am you!
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