Jay Loveless Poet Free verse

Unshed Tears

Slice me with your tongue,
Razor blade wounds,
To suck out all my poisens,
Sweet lonely lullaby,
Accusing eyes of sadism,
Picture perfect prodegy, 
My Deadly Sin,
A bitter taste of arson,
Burning in my vital organ,
Your the pyre that burns away my mortality,
A sip of tea made from Lilly of the Valley,
A shadow of Death stalking,
With odd angel like wings,
A Numbing kiss like Drowning in Morphine,
My Oblivion,
Sweet arms to rest in till my vision no longer holds,
Eyes neither like Hell nor Heaven,
Cocain Addiction,
That Drip of Drugs into your system,
Intoxicated blood stream,
I'd rather not dream,
And instead get lost within - Your paralysing,
Your Paralysing, Brain lapse,
Your moving too fast,
Stay slow and dreamy,
Dancing silhoutte,
Like a burning forest fire,
Pain throughout my veins,
Ravishing and Beautiful,
A voice torn from my throat,
Dying joyfully,
With my last sight of you. . .

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Skat A November 20, 2012 at 8:53 PM Hi,,,, SKAT~

Leonard Taormina November 8, 2012 at 12:45 AM This work grips at me like going a hundred miles an hour down a dark abandoned road going know where. Thanks for sharing

Richard Lamoureux November 6, 2012 at 5:41 PM My heart weeps for you. Your pain is expressed with such force that it demands to be heard. I hope those who love you are listening. This much sorrow is to great for one person to carry on their own. I have added you to my favorite list as well as my prayers. You are very talented and I admire your ability to express yourself.

Sara Kendrick October 21, 2012 at 3:30 PM Very expressie work about the sad topic of addiction..I am glad that I stopped by..It has a great rap beat to it..I hope that you are not the one addicted or have experienced adddiction for they is a bad bedfellow..I trust just a work about the topic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara Jay Loveless October 22, 2012 at 1:49 PM I like that everyone interprets what I write differently, I find that that makes a good write. However, the subject of "Addiction" is not a substance....at least not a physical substance. I find that in this my so called addiction is love. The way I write it, it's both a good thing and a bad thing. Ying and yang. Thats how its always been for me. The good comes with the bad.

Justin Bordner October 19, 2012 at 6:29 PM Love it, completely! Let us not run from the pain but run with it, to those destinations of loud awareness where fury finds release, and love for life a messanger - everything about this testimony is hot Jay - you have most certainly reacquainted yourself with the Divine, and I'm euphoric to know your work, your soul - FAV. file for this gem - J.A.B. % Jay Loveless October 20, 2012 at 6:33 AM Thank you for your compliments and when you say I reacquainted myself with the Divine I definately take that as one. The way I see it, love and pain go hand in hand. And the most beautiful thing can often be the most destructive, and vice versa.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2012 at 10:43 AM A beautiful poem, but so sad so sad ...... Very well written, from the sad thoughts. - Hope your day is brighter in the near future. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Jay Loveless October 19, 2012 at 11:57 AM Thank you for your comments and wishes of well being. I too hope that my days get better...Though I must say, there is more than saddness here.