Unshackled Conception Awakened

Just for a moment,wait
    hesitate and dream
        and receive
Step outside the box
      imagination cries
          to be freed,
Unshackled ,awaken
      conception's can-do,
         make believe;
Experiment and try
      the novel ,unique 
          in you,lie,
Just for a moment,don't
    hesitate ,let it
        formulate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Macmillan Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 8:58 AM
I really enjoyed the flow in this own, Brian. I also liked the juxtaposition between certain line endings-- "wait" "can-do" and then "don't." Glad I stopped by this poem... I'd come to let you know (as you, too, were touched by the poem "Grief." I found a poem by Barbara Cooker that seems like part 1 to that poem.) Hope you have a good day. Cyndi
Strand Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Cyndi for your comment and for bring talent like Barbara to our notice.Your are one of our noted talents too, here on our PS workshop.,innovative and adept and learned.A blessing indeed to the many folk who come here to learn and grow.
Pf Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 6:11 AM
Nice poem!
Strand Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Thanks
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace