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Unshackled Conception Awakened

Just for a moment,wait hesitate and dream and receive Step outside the box imagination cries to be freed, Unshackled ,awaken conception's can-do, make believe; Experiment and try the novel ,unique in you,lie, Just for a moment,don't hesitate ,let it formulate

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Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 3/24/2017 8:58:00 AM

I really enjoyed the flow in this own, Brian. I also liked the juxtaposition between certain line endings-- "wait" "can-do" and then "don't." Glad I stopped by this poem... I'd come to let you know (as you, too, were touched by the poem "Grief." I found a poem by Barbara Cooker that seems like part 1 to that poem.) Hope you have a good day. Cyndi

Brian Strand
Date: 3/24/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Cyndi for your comment and for bring talent like Barbara to our notice.Your are one of our noted talents too, here on our PS workshop.,innovative and adept and learned.A blessing indeed to the many folk who come here to learn and grow.

Thatgirlfrommars Pf

Date: 3/24/2017 6:11:00 AM

Nice poem!

Brian Strand
Date: 3/24/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thanks