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Doing Time for the Rhyme

I sat upon a park bench
With a journal on my lap
Writing out a limerick
That I dreamed up in a nap

An officer came strolling by
He glanced down at my book
His hand moved to his holster
As in fear he clearly shook

Now stop right there
He boldly said eraser in his hand
Put down that pen and step away
He shouted in command

What unlawful words are these
He glared with bushy eyes
It's just a little limerick sir
I said in great surprise

You can't express yourself like that
This is a public park
You should not even do those things
When hiding in the dark

You cannot write out words like that
They're dangerous, words can kill
You must have a license 
To possess that kind of skill

I do not have a license sir
To him I meekly said
I'm simply trying to work out
The thoughts within my head

You unrepentant criminal
I'll see that you do time
A thousand days in jail
And you'll give up this life of rhyme


                                  March 29, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/22/2017 10:02:00 AM
Hi Erik, You did a great job with the contest theme. I enjoyed the rhymes. Congratulations on your win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/21/2017 9:22:00 PM
Erik, enjoy.. congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 4/21/2017 7:12:00 PM
Congrats to you, Erik! Well done mate.
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Date: 4/21/2017 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Erik, well written. :))
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Date: 4/21/2017 12:01:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one ..Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/21/2017 12:01:00 PM
I knew this one was a winner. Congrats.
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Date: 4/21/2017 11:31:00 AM
This was awesome! I love the rhythm and flow to it. Congrats!
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Date: 4/21/2017 10:52:00 AM
Love it, Erik. Words are dangerous, indeed. Congrats on your win with this enjoyable poem.
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Date: 4/21/2017 10:30:00 AM
Love how this starts out on a park bench and the whole interaction with the cop! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 3/29/2017 4:48:00 PM
this is adorable! i very much enjoyed it, erik...
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Erik Savage
Date: 3/29/2017 9:22:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2017 3:32:00 PM
Lol awesome! You got my vote ;) 7!
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Erik Savage
Date: 3/29/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thanks. And also for the seven.
Date: 3/29/2017 3:02:00 PM
This was great and that last line, fantastic. "A life of rhyme" I wish I had thought of that. Good luck in the contest.
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Erik Savage
Date: 3/29/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thanks.
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