Unshackle My Verse

Doing Time for the Rhyme

I sat upon a park bench
With a journal on my lap
Writing out a limerick
That I dreamed up in a nap

An officer came strolling by
He glanced down at my book
His hand moved to his holster
As in fear he clearly shook

Now stop right there
He boldly said eraser in his hand
Put down that pen and step away
He shouted in command

What unlawful words are these
He glared with bushy eyes
It's just a little limerick sir
I said in great surprise

You can't express yourself like that
This is a public park
You should not even do those things
When hiding in the dark

You cannot write out words like that
They're dangerous, words can kill
You must have a license 
To possess that kind of skill

I do not have a license sir
To him I meekly said
I'm simply trying to work out
The thoughts within my head

You unrepentant criminal
I'll see that you do time
A thousand days in jail
And you'll give up this life of rhyme


                                  March 29, 2017
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Y. Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Hi Erik, You did a great job with the contest theme. I enjoyed the rhymes. Congratulations on your win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Roper Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Erik, enjoy.. congratulations on your win ~*
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 7:12 PM
Congrats to you, Erik! Well done mate.
Pett Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Erik, well written. :))
Green Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 12:01 PM
I knew this one was a winner. Congrats.
May Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 12:01 PM
I really enjoyed this one ..Congrats on your win
Dupins Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 11:31 AM
This was awesome! I love the rhythm and flow to it. Congrats!
Krampe Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Love it, Erik. Words are dangerous, indeed. Congrats on your win with this enjoyable poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Love how this starts out on a park bench and the whole interaction with the cop! Congrats on your win in my contest!
Bauer Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 4:48 PM
this is adorable! i very much enjoyed it, erik...
Savage Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Lol awesome! You got my vote ;) 7!
Savage Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Thanks. And also for the seven.
Green Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 3:02 PM
This was great and that last line, fantastic. "A life of rhyme" I wish I had thought of that. Good luck in the contest.
Savage Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Thanks.
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