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Doing Time for the Rhyme I sat upon a park bench With a journal on my lap Writing out a limerick That I dreamed up in a nap An officer came strolling by He glanced down at my book His hand moved to his holster As in fear he clearly shook Now stop right there He boldly said eraser in his hand Put down that pen and step away He shouted in command What unlawful words are these He glared with bushy eyes It's just a little limerick sir I said in great surprise You can't express yourself like that This is a public park You should not even do those things When hiding in the dark You cannot write out words like that They're dangerous, words can kill You must have a license To possess that kind of skill I do not have a license sir To him I meekly said I'm simply trying to work out The thoughts within my head You unrepentant criminal I'll see that you do time A thousand days in jail And you'll give up this life of rhyme March 29, 2017

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Date: 4/22/2017 10:02:00 AM
Hi Erik, You did a great job with the contest theme. I enjoyed the rhymes. Congratulations on your win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/21/2017 9:22:00 PM
Erik, enjoy.. congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 4/21/2017 7:12:00 PM
Congrats to you, Erik! Well done mate.
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Date: 4/21/2017 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Erik, well written. :))
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Date: 4/21/2017 12:01:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one ..Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/21/2017 12:01:00 PM
I knew this one was a winner. Congrats.
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Date: 4/21/2017 11:31:00 AM
This was awesome! I love the rhythm and flow to it. Congrats!
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Date: 4/21/2017 10:52:00 AM
Love it, Erik. Words are dangerous, indeed. Congrats on your win with this enjoyable poem.
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Date: 4/21/2017 10:30:00 AM
Love how this starts out on a park bench and the whole interaction with the cop! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 3/29/2017 4:48:00 PM
this is adorable! i very much enjoyed it, erik...
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Erik Savage
Date: 3/29/2017 9:22:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2017 3:32:00 PM
Lol awesome! You got my vote ;) 7!
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Erik Savage
Date: 3/29/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thanks. And also for the seven.
Date: 3/29/2017 3:02:00 PM
This was great and that last line, fantastic. "A life of rhyme" I wish I had thought of that. Good luck in the contest.
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Erik Savage
Date: 3/29/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thanks.

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