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Unsettled Calm

Unsettled Calm

Why am I writing this, 
when they say... 
really no one cares? 
I don't believe they are right. 
The more "they" try to prove themselves, 
the more "they" show who they really are, 
and their true intentions. 

"No one." is out there. Just like me. 
Wondering if there is anyone left, 
that is still trying to make things
different than they are? 
"No one" has not given up. 
They are simply feeling alone. 

Altogether we are empty, 
but as one we are full. 
The object lesson is to wake up
and live the time that is passing. 
Not just pass through. 

Tiny hearts, 
courageous, brave souls... 
the remnant of the whole, 
left behind to remind
others about the coming... 
of the Lord
on that day "we" will pray, 
thanksgiving at last.
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Bell Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Hallelujah! 2 Corn 4:7-10 & Gal 6:7-9 are ringing in my heart, for...we are Persuaded that Everyone of His Promises is already ours! And so, we press-on in the strength of His Marvelous Name, Jesus! Excellent, so enjoyed! Blessings, luv~
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August 7, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Thank you... Blessings to you and yours... Ann
Zahid Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 12:39 AM
Nicely penned... Blessings
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August 7, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Thank you, friend. May the Lord bless your day. Ann
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:54 PM
'No one is out there...' 'No one cares...' The Lord will unleash his Love throughout atmosphere's air...
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August 7, 2022 at 12:34 PM
He is already here... breath him in, and the world is changed. Thank you for your kind comments. Ann
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