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Unselfish Heart

Line of inquiry - Ego shorn, here now reborn. Unselfish Heart The glow of the unselfish heart Decorates emptiness with candles While scattered relics of garden purity Re-light votives in Babylon In the gleam of selfless candelas Nascent tapers breathe new oxygen In the eternal fire of the Samaritan heart Lanterns revive requiems for still born joy As sunrise glimmers of the merciful spirit Leave tealights in newborn cradles When icy enigmatic self-adorations Flee before incandescent revelations of humility The glow of the unselfish heart Decorates new naked selves with candles Swaddled in the first shy blush Of tingling flambeaus for new butterflies. 7-2-22 Contest: Ego Shorn, here now reborn Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 7/15/2022 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Unselfish Heart" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/17/2022 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula. You truly have an "unselfish heart" as you send your lovely messages of congratulations and support. They are truly appreciated. Many blessings sent to you in bouquets of gratitude.
Date: 7/15/2022 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your shining win and this outstanding poem my dear friend, Sam! Thanks again for sharing another precious gem of yours. God bless. Hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/17/2022 9:43:00 AM
Dear friend, your words of compliment just warm my heart and I send you heartfelt gratitude! Thank you! This wonderful theme was a great opportunity to explore a new place of wonders. I am so glad that I got to share it with you. Sending your blessings and hugs!
Date: 7/14/2022 10:38:00 PM
Unselfish Heart glows continuous. Big Congrats to win. Love.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/17/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Anisha! Your lovely compliment has left a definite glow of gratitude in my heart. Thank you! Sending you blessings in gratitude!
Date: 7/14/2022 9:21:00 PM
So happy to see your poem placed very high. Just like John Bunyan's 'Pilgrim's Progress', you are indeed ascending the ladder to great heights rung by rung, though hard is the climb ! Hearty Congratulations !
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/17/2022 9:36:00 AM
Greeting Valsa! Many thanks of heartfelt gratitude. You are so correct in your analogy - writing poetry is like climbing a ladder and it can be a difficult challenge but we are truly blessed in the journey especially when friends join us and opportunities for growth arise in contests like Seekers. Blessings for your journey! You always make the climb more joyful!
Date: 7/14/2022 8:35:00 PM
You continue to amaze us with your sublime and deep poetry Sam! Another level! Congrats on your podium finish
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/17/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Seeker for your congratulations, your placement and for your lovely message that both encourages and honors this this labor of love in poetry. Once again your theme for this contest took me on an adventure into a new place of discovery. I am grateful! Sending you many blessings and much gratitude.
Date: 7/8/2022 9:48:00 PM
How deep is your perception of a heart from where ego and sefishness have fled and love and light have taken their place ! Enjoyed every line of this soul searching poem especially the lines- "In the eternal fire of the Samaritan heart/ Lanterns revive requiems for still born joy".... Great !
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/12/2022 8:59:00 AM
Valsa, thank you! Can you tell how far behind I am in commenting? This was, indeed, a "soul searching" poem with each line birthing slowly as part of a process of discovery! Seeker's contest themes seem to take me into new places reviving, refreshing, me. It is a true joy to go together into those places for I see your journey in your poems. Take care dear friend! Sending you blessings of light and love!
Date: 7/6/2022 10:45:00 AM
This poem is extremelu thought provoking - i love the whole poem but the last four lines from 'the glow of.......to .....for new butterflies' - makes it very touching poem, good luck in the contest. So really lovely, you are poetry soups philosopher, Sam my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/7/2022 9:57:00 AM
Dear friend, your lovely message just warmed my heart like the glow of those candles. Thank you! It was an interesting process writing this poem as each line came to birth slowly and it was a journey into the unknown unto itself. Thank you for sharing in that journey dear friend. I do so hate to travel alone! Sending you blessings and hugs! Sam
Date: 7/3/2022 1:10:00 PM
Deep and engaging. A thought provoking write. Well done. You have a winner I feel in the contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/3/2022 2:50:00 PM
Karen, thank you so much for your affirming message. I really struggled with this theme and it means so much to know that you were engaged in it and by it. I am so grateful for your feedback and lovely note. Blessing! Happy 4th!

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