Unselfish

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Inspired by a christmas movie called "Once upon A Christmas Miralce"

What could be more unselfish
than to give a part of your body
to a complete stranger? 
Knowing that your gift will save their life
Not caring that your own life is at risk.
just to help this stranger.
To know that your unself act
will allow them to live
to maybe have their own family
to be for ever be one with them
We need more people like this.
The world becomes a better place.
Most would not even entertain
doing something like this
I can not revel a more unselfish
Than to give a stranger part 
of yourself as living gift.

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Daisy Meadows

Date: 12/1/2023 5:26:00 AM

So true! Well said!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2023 4:39:00 AM

hi jeanette nice of you to visit hugs Shadow

Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 3:23:00 PM

I agree, Shadow, kudos to all that have and all that will give of themselves to save or help others. I like your poem, Shadow; I'll be back to read more soon. A poet friend to be, Bill

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2023 4:38:00 AM

ty Bill for your remarks hugs Shadow

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2023 2:39:00 PM

Yes, I would say that is an unselfish gift to let a person live and to live a better life by our donation. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2023 4:32:00 AM

yes Sara as a race we tend to scuttle by nice to see you hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 10:26:00 AM

Profound and wise words really well delivered dear Shadow! I loved reading this and the flow of your thoughts is as always so seamless and it connects to the soul as what you convey is so easy to comprehend and feel! Pleasure visiting your page and reading you always

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/27/2023 10:57:00 AM

ty Ink for your kind words hugs Shadow