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UNSEEN FORCE

The cold breeze on my face. Treetops whooping it up. The wild swoosh of wind. The first bolt of lightning and crackle of thunder… My dad remembers several feet of snow - a wall of solid white. He measures himself alongside Buffalo. Mine is the excitement of a storm, I can feel it, even as I upswing. I might fly, like Dorothy, or on the witch’s stolen broomstick, or on the wings of the tornadic sky. Fascination found in the rush, the power of an unseen force. The Holy Spirit thrives inside of me. It’s a firestorm of spiritual vivacity.

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Date: 4/26/2024 2:31:00 AM
Dear Kim, what a beautiful description of a snowstorm, which we in Malta do not have. Glad you mentioned your father. I often think of him. A beautiful poem. Hugs xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2024 9:11:00 AM
Thank you! I have mentioned you often to my Dad, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 4/25/2024 4:54:00 PM
Magnificent poem, Kim. I enjoyed the descriptive words and lines. More importantly, these lines spoke to me of such faith and spirituality: Fascination found in the rush, the power of an unseen force. The Holy Spirit thrives inside of me. It’s a firestorm of spiritual vivacity. truly that unseen force is a rush..!! Have a blessed evening, Kim, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2024 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! A great encouragement! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 4/25/2024 3:08:00 PM
Unseen forces of the wind, storms, tornadoes excite, yet I love how you put the Holy Spirit in as the most powerful force that there is! Enjoyed this, Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2024 9:13:00 AM
Truly, nature mimics the unseen. Indeed the Holy Spirit, on one’s side cannot be contained. Blessings ~ Kim

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