Haiku 6

fingers on raised dots read of diamonds in the sky - they shine down on her

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2017 9:46:00 AM

Yes indeed our fingers can be our eyes. Anyone who has loved another in the dark can attest to this. This is a great one liner Sneha.

Len Gasun

Date: 12/26/2017 11:08:00 PM

This is so wonderful my dear poet friend, Sneha! The magic touch on braille! Good luck in the contest! Merry Christmas too and Best Wishes for the New Year 2018! Hugs.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/26/2017 12:19:00 PM

This is beautiful, Sneha! Braille has changed the lives of many! gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/25/2017 9:19:00 PM

Sneha, an enchanting and alluring Monoku. Such brilliant imagery! Best wishes in the contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2017 6:19:00 PM

This made me think of Helen Keller Sneha! a lovely monoku:-) I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and my best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2017 2:58:00 PM

oh this is wondrous, Sneha. Merry Christmas, dear.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/25/2017 8:40:00 AM

Beautiful, original, creative..a winning poem.