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This or That Contest, Vol 22.   Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

December 24, 2023

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If people have some sort of yearning, dissatisfaction or some itch that hasn't been scratched, it might be because they aren't looking in the right direction for a solution. They aren't looking within.     ~ Russell Brand


Sometimes I need to make a switch
when things go awry, like a glitch
causing worry and makes me twitch
An unscratched itch      An unscratched itch

Mindful of things I'd like to do
a new hobby I might pursue
learn to paddle my own canoe
Have a breakthrough        Have a breakthrough

To satisfy my heart's desire
and ignite the spark of love's fire
I'd do whatever I require
My goals aspire     My goals aspire

Scratch my itch when I've the notion
Put my ideas into motion
following through with devotion
and emotion             and emotion

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Date: 1/10/2024 10:26:00 PM
"To satisfy my heart's desire and ignite the spark of love's fire I'd do whatever I require My goals aspire My goals aspire" - a very melodiously ringing poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing, inspirational write, Lin:-) Thoroughly enjoyed.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/11/2024 10:51:00 AM
I actually thought you wrote a "Desperate Hope" poem, Lin, but I'm so glad you chose the Unscratched Itch theme as just a few tackled it. Rest assured, I loved the form chosen and your poem, my friend..
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/10/2024 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Edward, but I think I should've chosen the phrase that got all the first-place mentions. Or perhaps you didn't like the form I used.
Date: 1/10/2024 11:12:00 AM
Enjoyed this rhyming thought provoking poem! Congratulations on your win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/10/2024 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Karen.
Date: 12/25/2023 5:52:00 PM
Just be sure that whoever scratches that itch.., is worth the devotion . Enjoyed. Terry
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/25/2023 5:56:00 PM
Great advice to consider, Terry. I hope your day was fantastic.
Date: 12/25/2023 9:31:00 AM
Yep, I know the irritating feeling. We live and hopefully progress to learn. Well said!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/25/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind thoughts, Joe.
Date: 12/25/2023 1:41:00 AM
Beautiful and well crafted poem with meaningful message. Merry Christmas.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/25/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank for your kind works, and Holiday Wishes to you, too, Subimal.
Date: 12/24/2023 9:54:00 AM
To live in peace and have cheer, where worries would all disappear, and friendships are nothing but clear, hear hear hear hear...Merry Christmas Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/24/2023 10:23:00 AM
Hi, Tim. It’s wonderful to hear from You. Thanks for your holiday wishes and I hope you and your loved ones enjoy the season.
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