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I sing my thoughts a lullaby And beg them to be still Unruly children full of play They go against my will Another game of hide and seek Each one appears by turn Through hours of this endless night Like candles, my thoughts burn I sing my thoughts a lullaby In hopes that they will sleep Alas, when one is drifting off The other makes a peep I toss and turn the hours away My thoughts all tumble too I sing an endless lullaby Each thought a dream of you Now dawn has come and touched the sky Pink hues replace the grey My thoughts now sing a happy song They know that they can stay Each thought of you renewed in strength Now dances through my day At night another lullaby While thoughts of you just play Eileen Manasian

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/27/2024 9:39:00 AM

A beautiful poem Eileen, singing thoughts a lullaby, what a good idea, will have to try that when having trouble drifting off to sleep… Beryl

Tom Woody

Date: 4/14/2024 5:02:00 PM

Reads so smoothly with great rhymes and cadence. At the end of the day when thoughts are troubling our hearts, musing on our loved ones can save the night

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/14/2024 11:15:00 AM

"I sing my thoughts a lullaby" Beautiful poetic lines dear friend Elleen. You appear to have lots of love for Music and may be you must be singing. Music and singing is the loftiest gift given by God to us and I also love music. With best wishes....Ravindra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2024 4:43:00 PM

I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one plus the topic is great. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2024 8:39:00 AM

wow, I love this kind of poetry, Eileen, simple yet so wonderful in meaning and so cute!! A FAVE

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/12/2024 12:35:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. So good of you to read and comment. I appreciate it.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2024 5:53:00 AM

Nocturnal unruly thoughts can deprive us of much needed sleep and peace of mind, Eileen! But, having said that, many a worthy poem has been born thanks to their presence! ~ An enjoyable poem, light and with a lovely smooth flow. ~ Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/12/2024 12:35:00 AM

Your words of affirmation mean so much to me. Thank you, dear Paul. I'm glad you liked this piece.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/11/2024 2:52:00 AM

This one has a charming rhyme, and leaves one feeling light hearted long after the read, Eileen, this is a beauty of a poem, ! soupmail

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/12/2024 12:36:00 AM

So happy you liked it, dear. I responded to you mail. Sending hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/10/2024 8:43:00 AM

Dear Eileen, your poem beautifully captures the restless dance of thoughts and emotions. I loved the imagery of unruly children, and the struggle to find peace within oneself. Your ability to weave longing and peace into verses is enchanting. It's the power of love and its ability to calm even the most restless mind. - Blessings, Daniel

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/10/2024 11:08:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and the kind comments. I'm an overthinker. It's hard to still my mind, but I love poetry and when I have time, I focus on that. Blessings