Paul Callus Poet Free verse

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10/27 Sassy Halloween Artwork

Unrestrained

irresistible and
sexually alluring
a wanton vixen
entices with candy lust
fire sparkling in her eyes...
he greedily follows her
into the shadows of
an eerie misty night, 
down the narrow
winding path of no return...

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Brian Strand: 
Late Nov. 2018 Contest
Placed 1st

Lewis Raynes: Sexy Contest
Placed 6th

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Gregory Richard Barden November 29, 2018 at 3:40 AM Very nicely done, Paul - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-) Paul Callus November 29, 2018 at 6:41 AM Thank you on all counts, Gregory:) Regards & blessings to you, too. // paul

Constance La France November 28, 2018 at 9:58 AM Paul, awesome poem and deserving of both those wins, CONGRATULATIONS for sure, loved your sexy write ~ Paul Callus November 28, 2018 at 11:51 AM Thank you, Constance. So pleased that you enjoyed:) Regards // paul

Kenisha Shines November 28, 2018 at 3:46 AM Enjoyed your poem .Congrats on your win!have a great day Paul Callus November 28, 2018 at 11:42 AM Thank you, Kenisha. I have just realized that you have been at Soup for many years, and yet this must be the first time our paths have crossed! Regards // paul

Eve Roper November 26, 2018 at 11:07 PM Nicely done, Paul, congratulations on your win. Paul Callus November 27, 2018 at 2:41 AM Thank you, Eve; your visit and congrats are both appreciated. Hugs // paul

Michelle Faulkner November 26, 2018 at 1:38 PM Love the line 'entices with candy lust', many congratulations! Paul Callus November 26, 2018 at 3:02 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Michelle...thank you! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 12:17 AM - Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus November 26, 2018 at 11:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier November 25, 2018 at 11:25 PM Well penned, Paul. Congrats on your well deserved win. Paul Callus November 26, 2018 at 8:28 AM Many thanks, Line; I hadn't realized the results were out! Regards / paul

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 21, 2018 at 11:35 AM This is one outstanding poem, Paul. I loved the line ... a wanton vixen entices with candy lust fire sparkling in her eyes. Great ending too. Makes you think twice about being retinal allured. Cool muse poetry. Love and best wishes for the coming holidays. Paul Callus November 21, 2018 at 1:09 PM Hi Freddie. So pleased to have you visiting, and thank you for the points you commented about. Best wishes for Thanksgiving. // paul

Nette Onclaud November 19, 2018 at 5:11 PM ohh my, really tempting and well done, paul... congrats on your fine award!...huggs Paul Callus November 20, 2018 at 4:04 AM Thank you, Nette. I very much enjoyed your pure delights of spring winning entry, too! Hugs // paul

Edward Ibeh November 18, 2018 at 10:57 AM Lovely! Congratulations on a deserving win, Paul!:-) Paul Callus November 18, 2018 at 12:03 PM Thank you, Edward. I enjoyed your winning entry, too. Regards // paul

CayCay Godwin November 17, 2018 at 6:22 PM Well done - I can't help but wonder how things worked out on that path, my imagination wanders. You drew me in. All the best ... CayCay Paul Callus November 18, 2018 at 12:03 PM Thank you, CayCay. Glad you enjoyed and that your thoughts linger.... Regards // paul

Carole Duet November 17, 2018 at 3:53 PM Geeezzz! This is scary...and so clever, Paul. Paul Callus November 17, 2018 at 4:38 PM Thank you on both counts, Carole:) Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos November 17, 2018 at 6:29 AM Hi Paul, Enjoyed this poem! Fantasies can be transferred to our poetry. Hard to resist this image though! The only obstacle holding one back would be the sobering thought of no return! Well written, Warm regards, Jennifer. Paul Callus November 17, 2018 at 4:37 PM You are right, Jennifer; very often we leap before we look....we follow the heart and ignore the mind! Regards // paul

Judy Ball November 16, 2018 at 3:45 PM Ooohoohoo! Scary stuff. Really good imagery and love the pic. Fits perfectly. God Bless, JB Paul Callus November 16, 2018 at 4:20 PM Time to stay within the defenses of our trusty homes, Judy:) We never know what lurks outside in the dark... Thank you for stopping by. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jack Horne November 16, 2018 at 1:16 PM oh, love this spine-tingling write Paul Callus November 16, 2018 at 2:48 PM Thank you, Jack. I'm not very Halloweeny, but I do try to get into the spirit.. Regards // paul

John Michaels November 14, 2018 at 3:30 PM Sexy and mysterious - nicely done, Paul! Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 4:11 PM Thank you, John. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley November 13, 2018 at 8:03 PM Greedy lust has been a tempting downfall for many. Your dark sensual imagery aptly illustrates how one can become lost in the lust for lust.. your verses illuminate, so enticingly, the naughty side of human nature, Paul. Warmest wishes and hugs my dear friend.. ~Susan Susan Ashley November 14, 2018 at 2:52 PM Yes, indeed it does. Imagination is a wonderland, isn’t it, my dear friend.. :)) Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 2:11 PM Lust, greed and temptation are not easy to deal with, dear Susan! What we try avoiding in real life gets transferred over to our poetry. Thank you for your most delightful comments. Warm regards & hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong November 13, 2018 at 6:11 PM Whohoo pretty creepy Paul! Your last line is perfect! : ) Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 2:08 PM So pleased that you liked it, Connie...thank you:) Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham November 13, 2018 at 5:36 PM Enjoyed your dark verse Paul, many have gone down that path never to return. Tom. Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 2:08 PM Indeed, you are right, Tom! But temptation often gets us entangled in its web! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands November 13, 2018 at 5:04 PM Well written Paul! :) Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thank you, Heidi:) Best regards // paul

Vijay Pandit November 13, 2018 at 4:50 PM Well written, Paul. The ending says it all..your words as alluring as the photo. Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 2:06 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Vijay:) Thank you. Regards // paul

Jan Allison November 13, 2018 at 3:43 PM A perfect title for a dark halloween poem paul, i love the imagery especially her candy lust sparkling eyes :-) adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus November 14, 2018 at 2:05 PM Thank you for the lovely comments, Jan...and the fav! Your generosity is appreciated:) Hugs // paul