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Unrestrained

irresistible and
sexually alluring
a wanton vixen
entices with candy lust
fire sparkling in her eyes...
he greedily follows her
into the shadows of
an eerie misty night, 
down the narrow
winding path of no return...

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Brian Strand: 
Late Nov. 2018 Contest
Placed 1st

Lewis Raynes: Sexy Contest
Placed 6th

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2018

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Gregory Richard Barden Date: 11/29/2018 3:40:00 AM Very nicely done, Paul - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2018 6:41:00 AM Thank you on all counts, Gregory:) Regards & blessings to you, too. // paul

Constance La France Date: 11/28/2018 9:58:00 AM Paul, awesome poem and deserving of both those wins, CONGRATULATIONS for sure, loved your sexy write ~ Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/28/2018 11:51:00 AM Thank you, Constance. So pleased that you enjoyed:) Regards // paul

Kenisha Shines Date: 11/28/2018 3:46:00 AM Enjoyed your poem .Congrats on your win!have a great day Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/28/2018 11:42:00 AM Thank you, Kenisha. I have just realized that you have been at Soup for many years, and yet this must be the first time our paths have crossed! Regards // paul

Eve Roper Date: 11/26/2018 11:07:00 PM Nicely done, Paul, congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2018 2:41:00 AM Thank you, Eve; your visit and congrats are both appreciated. Hugs // paul

Michelle Faulkner Date: 11/26/2018 1:38:00 PM Love the line 'entices with candy lust', many congratulations! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/26/2018 3:02:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Michelle...thank you! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 12:17:00 AM - Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/26/2018 11:00:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier Date: 11/25/2018 11:25:00 PM Well penned, Paul. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/26/2018 8:28:00 AM Many thanks, Line; I hadn't realized the results were out! Regards / paul

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/21/2018 11:35:00 AM This is one outstanding poem, Paul. I loved the line ... a wanton vixen entices with candy lust fire sparkling in her eyes. Great ending too. Makes you think twice about being retinal allured. Cool muse poetry. Love and best wishes for the coming holidays. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/21/2018 1:09:00 PM Hi Freddie. So pleased to have you visiting, and thank you for the points you commented about. Best wishes for Thanksgiving. // paul

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/19/2018 5:11:00 PM ohh my, really tempting and well done, paul... congrats on your fine award!...huggs Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/20/2018 4:04:00 AM Thank you, Nette. I very much enjoyed your pure delights of spring winning entry, too! Hugs // paul

Edward Ibeh Date: 11/18/2018 10:57:00 AM Lovely! Congratulations on a deserving win, Paul!:-) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/18/2018 12:03:00 PM Thank you, Edward. I enjoyed your winning entry, too. Regards // paul

CayCay Jennings Date: 11/17/2018 6:22:00 PM Well done - I can't help but wonder how things worked out on that path, my imagination wanders. You drew me in. All the best ... CayCay Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/18/2018 12:03:00 PM Thank you, CayCay. Glad you enjoyed and that your thoughts linger.... Regards // paul

Carole Duet Date: 11/17/2018 3:53:00 PM Geeezzz! This is scary...and so clever, Paul. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/17/2018 4:38:00 PM Thank you on both counts, Carole:) Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/17/2018 6:29:00 AM Hi Paul, Enjoyed this poem! Fantasies can be transferred to our poetry. Hard to resist this image though! The only obstacle holding one back would be the sobering thought of no return! Well written, Warm regards, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/17/2018 4:37:00 PM You are right, Jennifer; very often we leap before we look....we follow the heart and ignore the mind! Regards // paul

Judy Ball Date: 11/16/2018 3:45:00 PM Ooohoohoo! Scary stuff. Really good imagery and love the pic. Fits perfectly. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/16/2018 4:20:00 PM Time to stay within the defenses of our trusty homes, Judy:) We never know what lurks outside in the dark... Thank you for stopping by. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Jack Horne Date: 11/16/2018 1:16:00 PM oh, love this spine-tingling write Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/16/2018 2:48:00 PM Thank you, Jack. I'm not very Halloweeny, but I do try to get into the spirit.. Regards // paul

John Michaels Date: 11/14/2018 3:30:00 PM Sexy and mysterious - nicely done, Paul! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 4:11:00 PM Thank you, John. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley Date: 11/13/2018 8:03:00 PM Greedy lust has been a tempting downfall for many. Your dark sensual imagery aptly illustrates how one can become lost in the lust for lust.. your verses illuminate, so enticingly, the naughty side of human nature, Paul. Warmest wishes and hugs my dear friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Susan Ashley Date: 11/14/2018 2:52:00 PM Yes, indeed it does. Imagination is a wonderland, isn’t it, my dear friend.. :)) Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 2:11:00 PM Lust, greed and temptation are not easy to deal with, dear Susan! What we try avoiding in real life gets transferred over to our poetry. Thank you for your most delightful comments. Warm regards & hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/13/2018 6:11:00 PM Whohoo pretty creepy Paul! Your last line is perfect! : ) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 2:08:00 PM So pleased that you liked it, Connie...thank you:) Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/13/2018 5:36:00 PM Enjoyed your dark verse Paul, many have gone down that path never to return. Tom. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 2:08:00 PM Indeed, you are right, Tom! But temptation often gets us entangled in its web! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands Date: 11/13/2018 5:04:00 PM Well written Paul! :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 2:06:00 PM Thank you, Heidi:) Best regards // paul

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2018 4:50:00 PM Well written, Paul. The ending says it all..your words as alluring as the photo. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 2:06:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Vijay:) Thank you. Regards // paul

Jan Allison Date: 11/13/2018 3:43:00 PM A perfect title for a dark halloween poem paul, i love the imagery especially her candy lust sparkling eyes :-) adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/14/2018 2:05:00 PM Thank you for the lovely comments, Jan...and the fav! Your generosity is appreciated:) Hugs // paul