Unrequited Love - Parise Pariku

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Congrats Carolyn on your well deserved win in Rick's contest.

Congratulations friend, unique job, on your awesome poem's, and it's honorable place.

Very creative, unique take on the contest, Carolyn. Congratulations on your big win in the contest! Love, Audrey

originality takes over.. congrats carolyn..:)nette

wow Carolyn.Many congratulations for this super success.

Congratulations on your win..Sara

I love the unusual twist to the contest, Carolyn!! Makes me smile!! congratulations!!

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Rick, Carolyn

Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest, that last line make me smile ~~

ah, that poor Frankenstien! I enjoyed how you made a great ending line to go with your poem. Congratuations, Carolyn. LUv, Andrea

such imagery Carolyn, it reminds me of a Beauty and the beast situation. Harry

Yes, unrequited love is the perfect title for your very impressive entry, Carolyn! Beautiful imagery..I always marvel at the beauty of lightning. Aamazing! Thanks for your encouragement, Seafaress, always! Love, peace, joy, happiness and blessings always, Audrey

mystifyingly original, carolyn.. " ligh crackles" draw immediate attention to this piece... best winning wishes to you, special one!! hugggs, nette

This is quite the unique one, my dear! smile Agape, Moses

Smile ~ But a snapshots moment so, "Smile &, 'Say Cheese!?'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear, Precious & Lovely Carolyn Devonshire,' Amid The Penetrating Lightnings Strikings of, 'Eternally, Beautiful Love;' Happy Holidays;" Bye!:) ~

Smile ~ I love the parallelisms somewhat seemingful twist upon the closure's verse amid this reflective bearing painting "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ "Yes," it does seem sooo very often that the Created somehow, fail to see & or embrace the Creators true Love for they themselves; perhaps, because of All of the distracting elements amid the newness' I would believe, Shock of it all....It is amazing my dear, how, much can be found within ~ ....Cont:)

Your work is Outstanding,how are you dear?

Good luck in the contest...I don't think that I have looked at the contest so I don't know what it is about..I am sure that it will be in the winners' cirlce though..Your presence at my work about "Dad The Last Snowflake" was very uplifting..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara

and i was on his side. at mommas exchanging gifts and thought of you. merry christmas. love john

Very interesting take on Rick's pariku! Very unique, I think Rick will like this one! hugs- nikko :)

Excellent imagery and outstandingly composed words. This is superb my friend from your beautiful seasoned pen. My sincere good wishes for your entry in the contest, which should be on the top without doubt. Many thank for your kind and precious comments on 'My Xmas Prayer' and for your good wishes. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Carolyn Devonshire.

Carolyn, you sure did a marvellous job with this challenge.. Wishing you all the best for the contest my friend.. Love and blessings Wilma

Wonderful piece, Carolyn! I hope you have a great Christmas! Liz

Now this is a breath of fesh air... original and a sure winner... great poetry once again my dear poet friend...Happy Holidays to you and all around you...Love Michael