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Unrequited Love

Why did everything had to happen this way? Why do I still think of it? It's over anyway. Of your heart, I always wanted to be a part. Unrequited, fallen to the ground, is my heart shattered apart. One might be strong to collect those pieces fallen. But to join them again who would self embolden? For they know, its shape it would ultimately retain, But exposing its scars, its marks would always remain. Worst pain you would suffer, still more you would have to pay. For death is worst some may say . But it's not, when embraced everyday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/30/2017 2:26:00 PM
sad....and painful...whoever she is doesn't worth it ....but [ye aansu jo saja k tumne shabd banaye hai...kya kahe kitne dard humare bhi ubhar aay hai..] lovely poem shubham....
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 7/1/2017 1:14:00 AM
wow!!! amazing shayari manu... glad that you liked my work... !!!
Date: 6/12/2017 12:41:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, it s sad but it s true that when you re in true love na, and it s the first one and you didn t get it, you missed it every second of your life, it s my advise to everyone, if you truly love someone and if he/she worth it never ever delay in telling your partner about your feelings however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 6/12/2017 10:18:00 PM
So very true Faraz!!! I really appreciate your visit and your kind comment on this... however, this is a beautiful community to be in.. soupers here are truly fascinating... hearty welcome!!! Yes, I would surely stop by to visit your corner of the soup... :)
Date: 2/11/2017 8:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 2/12/2017 2:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot. Your regards mean a lot.
Date: 2/9/2017 3:52:00 AM
There is no pain like that of a broken heart and you expressed that succinctly. You are right, it feels like death everyday. Good one Shubham.
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 2/9/2017 6:40:00 AM
Yes, it does, phil. Thanks a lot for ur regards. :)
Date: 1/19/2017 6:23:00 AM
Very well said 'shattered apart' ...
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 1/19/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Sir. Still more yet to come. :) stay connected.

Book: Shattered Sighs