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The monster wanted love from the maiden
And gold that the townspeople paid him
When it came time to collect
Him the maiden did reject
To contain his wrath none could persuade him

 

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11/5/2018

Photo credit:  the maiden and the monster | LotusMoon Photography | via flickr

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The monster wanted love from the maiden And gold that the townspeople paid him When it came time to collect Him the maiden did reject To contain his wrath none could persuade him

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Date: 11/10/2018 4:13:00 PM
Sadly, the monsters don't live just in fairy tales -
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Mark Toney
Date: 11/10/2018 9:47:00 PM
So true.
Date: 11/6/2018 4:38:00 AM
nice limerick
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Mark Toney
Date: 11/6/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Mahtab. I appreciate the kind encouragement. ~Mark

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