Unpredictable Me

Here lies Wilma Nolene Neels


Kind spirited with a fickle demeanor, 
               a surprise package at birth
she constantly kept them guessing on earth… 












8th place
POETIC EPITAPH CONTEST
Sponsored by: ANDREA DIETRICH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Wilson Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:52 PM
I remember this one..love it! Congratulations! Take care~Deb
Falotico Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 1:56 PM
A winner from the start, you and the poem my love....Congrats love Michael
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Wilma. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Congrats dear Wilma my friend on your big win in Andrea's contest with this awesome epitaph ..great words here luv.. enjoy today ...
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:48 AM
This one is so cute, Wilma. Great work and worthy of a win! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Love this Wilma, love to know what your fickle demeanor is. Congrats with this and your win in the contest. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Wilma
Taylor Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:15 AM
Congrats, Wilma. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph
K. Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Well it sure is no wonder this won :) really enjoyed this one, Miss Surprise :) hope your day's treating you good ;)---- hugs :) & congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:31 PM
Congratulations in my contest, Wilma, with your cute epitaph here. In what way were you a surprise package? That sounds interesting! LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:20 PM
lovely, congrats on your win with this witty entry
Mannan Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Hey lovely one. Many congratulations for this one.
K. Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 8:01 PM
oh I just read this now and this is just so wonderful! loved this-- haha sure is a contender for my own fickle epitaph-- ;) -- & I believe that scatterbrained is a word but to describe you? not necessarily so because if you are a scatterbrain, it would be soo scary what I am!! go sleep now, Ms. Vampire ;) hahaha
Fraser Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 12:10 PM
And what a lovely surprice package indeed, good luck in the contest Wilma >> James
Falotico Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 1:55 PM
You have captured this contest with arms ope wide... well done my partner in crime....Love Michael
Ahmad Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 12:20 PM
hey Wilma, what's up? Nice one but dont say you are unpredictable, you are indeed, one of the best poetesses :) nice one, I liked this one!
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:45 AM
gosh, Wilma, did this get into the contest? I notice it was posted the 14th and I think the contest closed before then. I like this one, Wilma. YOu did a nice job with it and I hope it has been included with all the other awesome entries I have recieved. LUv, Andrea
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October 14, 2010 at 5:35 PM
very unpredictable you, Doris~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
Devonshire Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Very cute description of the "surprise package," Wilma. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 7:09 AM
This is going to be in the top ten I think..I am so enjoying this contest. BG
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Very creative and impressive write as an epitaph, Wilma
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Sweet and to the point. did you really mean demeanor or devils in her? hehehe just kidding. now spoiled your poem. sorry. I asked for a valid opinion so I know what to write and what not to write. Naughty
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Great Epitaph...Reads like an interesting character lies there..Good luck in the contest....Sara
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