Unpoetic Justice Example
Unpoetic Justice 2: Best Freeverse as Traditional Poems
A poem I will not publish here was stolen by a man and remixed slightly, then claimed as his own. I have taken an original version and restructured it through AI Chatbot and Aphres. This poem will be credited to AI and anonymous.
I'm so sorry to hear that someone claimed your poem as their own. I'd be happy to help you rewrite it with a new theme and structure.
Let's transform the poem into two rondeaus, focusing on the ideas of perseverance, nourishment, and gratitude. Here's a rewritten version:
Rondeau 1:
In every moment, cherish change's design.
Nourish your soul with hope's sweet, gentle fire.
Though challenges arise, don't lose your stride.
Persevere, and let your spirit never tire.
In every moment, cherish change's design.
Through life's flux, hold on to love's guiding light.
Embrace each step, and shine with inner might.
In every moment, cherish change's design.
Rondeau 2:
Gratitude's warmth illuminates the path.
For friends and family, a heart full of thanks
Reflect on journeys past, and the lessons learned.
Embrace the journey, and let love be your guide.
Gratitude's warmth illuminates the path.
In every step, find strength and a way to thrive.
Celebrate life's beauty, and let love survive.
Gratitude's warmth illuminates the path.
I've taken out the parts about fatigue and focused on the themes of nourishment, perseverance, and gratitude. The rondeau structure allows for a musical quality, with repeating lines and a precise rhyme scheme.
(AI Chatbot, Aphres, and Anonymous, 2024)
Please let me know if this meets your expectations or if you'd like me to make any adjustments!
Copyright © Stepha Kaye | Year Posted 2024
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