Unpicked

My heart ‘s slowly dissolving in the puddle of my tears My self worth disintegrating in the acid of your tongue My life falls apart as you pull those loose ends You watch me slowly unravel

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/6/2009 2:31:00 PM

Words sometimes are more criminal and a greater abuse than physical abuse. It takes courage to walk away. Vince

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/6/2009 5:34:00 AM

Great imagery and strong emotional content! Well done honey!! Best wishes, Keith

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/5/2009 2:21:00 PM

now is time to put on some blues. fix a drink. and plans someones demise. and if that doesn't make you feel better. then find somebody new. jhl

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/5/2009 2:00:00 PM

I hate the fact as I read this piece i get the feeling someone is manipulated..that someone is losing themself because they are being control.