Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

Unpacking Royal Baggage

I try unpacking her baggage
Why does she have to be so mean
You would think she was royalty
Sitting in her chair like a Queen

I pick up all her dishes
The woman has not a care
It seems that perspiration
will destroy her perfect hair

When it comes to making love
Me oh my how my hands shake
That woman is uncommon
She points out every mistake!



A fictional account "Thank God"!

For Carolyn Devonshire's "Gems for Baggage Contest"

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Lynn Marie March 13, 2017 at 8:19 PM A witty piece and your authors note made me laugh! :-) It's fun to read a "so outrageous poem, it couldn't possibly be true" and it feels like you had great fun writing it :-) blessings, lynn Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2017 at 8:17 AM You made my morning reading your kind comments.

Judy Ball March 7, 2017 at 1:04 PM WoW! She sounds like a real sweetie pie. Glad this is just a fantasy. Great rhyme and rhythm. Easily read and understood.. A great message in the words here. God Bless my friend. A big 7 from me. JB Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2017 at 8:16 AM Me too, thanks Judy. :0)

James Marshall Goff February 21, 2017 at 10:51 PM A treatise on relations! Well done! Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2017 at 8:16 AM Thanks James :0)

Vera Duggan February 20, 2017 at 11:43 PM Hi Richard, fiction or not there are woman out there like that, mind you at times I get treated like a queen and the only baggage I have is Peter and the kids, I love this little quatrain Richard, good luck in the contest and take care ........Vera Richard Lamoureux February 21, 2017 at 8:45 AM Thanks Vera, I do treat my sweetie like a queen but she also makes me feel like a King. Thanks for visiting.

Arthur Vaso February 18, 2017 at 10:49 PM so kind of you to say fictional, I wont tell my ex this poem if you dont!!! :) Richard Lamoureux February 21, 2017 at 8:45 AM Ha ha!

Duke Beaufort February 17, 2017 at 5:50 AM Cute. Who could be that mean? I am surprised she lets you touch her. I take that as more of an allegory for providing a service as a servant. This is a lot like having Trump as president. He likes to criticize everything, and he doesn't really do very much except self aggrandize. All showmanship. The outer appearances are all that matter, and aside from the royal companions, we are servants. Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:36 AM Thanks Duke.

Ralph Sergi February 16, 2017 at 11:38 AM Hi Rick: I really liked this one. I wish you well in the contest. Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:36 AM Thanks Ralph.

Mama Bear February 15, 2017 at 11:11 AM Used to know someone like this Glad she is not in my life any more Well done big 7 going out to you Love Mom Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thanks mom, love back to you.

James Horn February 15, 2017 at 10:52 AM Do you remember Royal Crown Cola, and Royal Prince Albert auditorium in London? Or are you a loyal Kansas City Royals fan? Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:39 AM What does an of this have to do with the price of tea in china? You are indeed a strange fellow.

Charlie Smith February 13, 2017 at 9:24 PM I'd take a pass on that one Richard, well done... Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:39 AM You are a wise man Charlie.

Agnes Krampe February 13, 2017 at 5:16 PM Glad this is not actually your life :) Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:40 AM Me too!

Charmaine Chircop February 13, 2017 at 1:23 PM Hahaha..Run Rick..Run... :)..I know its fiction..and its sad such people truly exist :) Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:41 AM It's sadder that others have to live with them. Thanks for visiting Charmaine.

Darren White February 13, 2017 at 12:55 PM I am suddenly really happy that I don't fancy women ;) Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:41 AM Ha ha, best comment of the day Darren.

Jan Allison February 13, 2017 at 11:54 AM I'm so glad it's fiction Richard! :-) hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2017 at 8:41 AM Me too Jan.

Tim Smith February 13, 2017 at 10:14 AM That is a woman to stay far away from...lol Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2017 at 10:37 AM Indeed she is!

Demetrios Trifiatis February 13, 2017 at 9:46 AM How can you do it, Richard? Haha! Imagine to have a companion like that my friend! Beautifully written! Good luck my friend! Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2017 at 9:50 AM Thanks Demetrios, I'm glad you enjoyed my silly bit of poetry.

Lim'Rik Flats February 13, 2017 at 9:04 AM :-). GOTD! (giggle of the day award) ~ john Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2017 at 9:09 AM Thanks John!