Unopened Eyes Co-Written With Doris Culverhouse

Cats on roof in snow
Sentinels watching looking
Without open eyes

The jet flies the governor's
Course set to adultery

Cat slips on frozen 
Snow, claws grip the edge, below
A fire awaits..... fate

Death takes the pilot,
In midair the govenor
Yearns...jet burst apart

Cat's grip is weak claws strip falls
Clings to  governor's carcass

Taxpayers buy a 
New plane, and exwife's dreams flow...
And flames still scorch!


(The cats are metaphoric for politicians.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
Fraser Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Excellent points in this piece Sara >> good write you two >> James
Culverhouse Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 6:19 AM
We will have to do another one some time. I think it turn out good.
Esquire Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Dear Sara, YOU and Doris have a Great Bond I usually don't pay much attention to Political POETRY but such a great Combo Punch by Two of my Favorite Southern Belles YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
Chachere Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:48 PM
WEll, you and your daughter are great poets together(- I am sorry for the late comments. i am dangerously busy. -Always&Forever Lynette
Freeman Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 6:37 PM
You ladys work well together. The metaphoric cat fits well. Smile. Sincere, Agape, Moses
Culverhouse Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Hey, I wrote what I hope to be the end, also. without seeing your lines. hope it works if not I can change it.
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