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Unlucky Lulu

Lulu was an unlucky woman Lost three sons one in a department store in 92 one in an ocean, deeply blue Where’s the third one? I asked mutual friend, Old Sue On the sidewalk, playing skip to my Lou Both of the other boys found their way home too One was fifty, the other was fifty-two I barely recognized them said Lulu This was told to me by story-teller Sue

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Date: 9/6/2023 8:16:00 AM
Sue's a storyteller just like you. I liked your Monorhyme, Caren. Bill
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/6/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Bill
Date: 9/6/2023 7:58:00 AM
Remind me to never have her babysit for me.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/6/2023 8:29:00 AM
I do not think I will have to

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