Unlucky Lulu

Lulu was an unlucky woman
Lost three sons
one in a department store in 92
one in an ocean, deeply blue
Where’s the third one? I asked mutual friend, Old Sue
On the sidewalk, playing skip to my Lou
Both of the other boys found their way home too
One was fifty, the other was fifty-two
I barely recognized them said Lulu
This was told to me by story-teller Sue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Sue's a storyteller just like you. I liked your Monorhyme, Caren. Bill
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Bill
Brotherton Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Remind me to never have her babysit for me.
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September 6, 2023 at 8:29 AM
I do not think I will have to
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