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Unlocking One Key To Love

A woman’s core lies hidden in the seed of a bud--
the key to her heart, found deep inside:
while a male chases that perfume so sweet ,
he needs to explore her mystique, untold.
Poetic language, oh, she will ignore,
for to court a maiden fair, the test is arduous…
remember,  sugared words flit  like a wind .
                                ~
How to conquer her soul, her eternal value,
a man must bear this bud’s many thorns,
and discover the sparkling rose within…
like so, unlock her charmed passion gently
not through rare jewels or  over- adulation. 
                               ~
What she needs is the rarest dream of all,
this key to her affection is only one, not three:
all she desires  from a man is to love her,
and continue to love her well incessantly
until end of twilight hours are fully done.


    ~

Three Keys Contest
Posted 7/17/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 5:07 AM
Congrats Nette, for your WIN with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
Rycroft Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Well done congrats great poem xx
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Yes just one key is enough for a woman,beautiful poem Nette!
Selfa Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Great write Nette! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 6:48 PM
beautifully penned Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:52 PM
So very lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your placement in the 'three keys' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 2:04 PM
...and one must wait patiently and future the awakening and opening of each rose. Beautifully written Nette. Thanks for participating in the contest
Marty Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 10:35 AM
How inspiring is this brilliant poem. Love is surely the one key that a woman desires ever.
La France Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Nette, oh you have such a beautiful style of writing, it is really quite breathless, and I am loving this 7 ~
Warrior Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Beautiful write Nette...a winner for me...good luck and god bless...^WW^
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:49 PM
I like what you did with this and I love the poem! :)
Conte Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Original is this poem. Could be 3 keys in one---love her, continue to love her, love till end of time. Fantastic,I want this dream too!
Datu Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:06 PM
I like how you turned this into something extraordinary. theme-wise. Am amazing poem that gets an upgrade for reminding me to love well!
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