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UNLIKELY LIAISON

A hare who was seeking a mate, Invited a snail on a date. But, while the hare waited, A trifle belated, The snail turned up seven days late

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Date: 6/15/2025 6:59:00 AM
Last but not least...LOL Bryn Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/14/2025 7:31:00 PM
That's a beauty Bryn, loved it !
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Date: 6/14/2025 12:01:00 PM
Very cute. Loved it. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:37:00 AM
If she loves him, she is willing to move at a snail’s pace. Congrats!
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:24:00 AM
Fantastic lim. Congrats
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:12:00 AM
Bryn, this is a GREAT limerick! A BIG congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 6/14/2025 7:36:00 AM
Okok...I see this is a first place Limerick for sure! I don't feel so bad now lol... this is the standard I couldn't live up to and I'm cool with that! I graciously accept defeat! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 6/14/2025 3:25:00 AM
Lol, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/8/2025 9:04:00 AM
Lol! "Unlikely" indeed! Dear Bryn, I adore your clever and witty limerick. Great last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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