UNLIKELY LIAISON

A hare who was seeking a mate,
Invited a snail on a date.
But, while the hare waited,
A trifle belated,
The snail turned up seven days late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 6:59 AM
Last but not least...LOL Bryn Congratulations! :)
Volumes Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:31 PM
That's a beauty Bryn, loved it !
Drowley Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Very cute. Loved it. Congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:37 AM
If she loves him, she is willing to move at a snail’s pace. Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Fantastic lim. Congrats
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:12 AM
Bryn, this is a GREAT limerick! A BIG congrats on your win! Janice
Woods Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Okok...I see this is a first place Limerick for sure! I don't feel so bad now lol... this is the standard I couldn't live up to and I'm cool with that! I graciously accept defeat! Congratulations! Xo
May Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Lol, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
Ashley Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Lol! "Unlikely" indeed! Dear Bryn, I adore your clever and witty limerick. Great last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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