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unlike a gift

A princess cried into her pillow.

She was blessed by birthright and virtue
but cursed, for reasons unseason'd
with an unstaid love.

She always wondered how she’d know if a particular feeling was ‘Love.’
She’d asked everyone - her mother, her governess, even the gardener.

She had a thousand questions.
“Does love come into being through will and intention, or does it break, suddenly, like waves on a rocky shore?” She’d asked.
Would there be a moment she’d recognise - like an artist proclaiming a work finished?
Was ‘love’ a value exchange - or just a transitory metonym for lust?
But no one, if knowing, would say and it drove her mad.

Such woes have furnished many a prayer but she wasn’t about to ask a priest.

She finally decided to ask the Wizard, inviting him up for a cup of Malmsey (a rare and luxurious wine).

“Love is a magical thing,” he’d said, taking a slow drag on his very long stemmed pipe, “not at all like a gift.” Adding, “You can give your love away - every kind of your love - and not be left with less than you started with.”

‘Wizards’.. she fumed inwardly, after he’d left. What on earth did THAT mean?
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A Christmas Playlist:
daweb.us/xmas/Christmas_12.mp3
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unstaid = unsettled
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Parker Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 8:49 PM
“You can give your love away - every kind of your love - and not be left with less than you started with.” Bitchin' start to say the least....lifelong journey. Or, accept God is Love and test all the parameters. Chef's kiss, Princess A.
Vionet Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Thank you!
Fallica Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 6:06 AM
NICE piece. . I remember you wondering about love back in HS, maybe freshman Yale. (Remember Yale? Lisa, Sunny, et al.?) I said, judging from your writing, love was going to hit you like a pile of bricks. So, . verdict? . <3
Vionet Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Oh, love is 'the Beatles,' it was a slow burn at the start, but it hit me - being separated (for a year) was a suck fest - but it hits me every day now. Just having him around makes me smile - we can do practically anything but if he's there, I'm good. So, too big thumbs up for love. =]
Conn Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 9:33 PM
Anna, Lisa AND Sunny ALL in the same sentence; I’m blushing in three perfect shades of servitude.
Theraven Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Hello Anais, Nice LOTR vibes in this, with gifts in the form of a question. One of the most important anyone will ever ask IMHO. Always where the real magic lies, in love. -Richard
Vionet Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Agreed =]
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