Unleashed

I'm not going to whisper
I will speak my mind. 
I will follow my intuition
Abandon judgements 
ignore unkind. 
Allow my car to steer
me in the right direction.
even when I do not have
a destination. 
I am 30 and full of unique
knowledge mixed with naiveness.
I met a man, my heart did fall
I danced without my watch.
I sang without volume control
I walked never looking down.
I looked life straight in the eyes
never bowing down or retreating. 
I fought my battles with no hesitation
I rarely apologized. 
I had a heart with more love than it could contain. 

by Kristen bruni for nette onclaud's AT THIS AGE contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 1:13 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Kristen. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Wonderful poem Kristen.Love it.Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 11:12 PM
30 is a VERY good age to be. So much is still on the horizon and you are in your prime. Congratulations on your win.
Macmillan Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 8:48 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win, Kristen. What a unique and beautiful take on this contest.I really enjoyed reading this. :-)
Pettit Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 5:41 PM
Joe wished you good luck, and you got it! Congratulations on winning.
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January 8, 2012 at 7:10 PM
Good for you! And, good luck in the contest.
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