Sneha Rv Poet Free verse

Unknown Beauty

Tired waters push their way through rocks
rocks hugged by rotting ivy's green
green surrounds the wild forest's stream,
stream flows calm, through places unknown...


11/6/15 
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Radhika Archana May 20, 2023 at 11:24 PM lot of love from uk this sana you write perfect your age? Sneha Rv May 27, 2023 at 5:53 AM hi, thanks so much. i am now 20 :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 7, 2016 at 12:42 AM Wow, I read it expecting something lovey-dovey and romantic like I love to write about...but instead found something of immense natural beauty. This was a good write, and only four lines -nice work! MC

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis January 24, 2016 at 3:13 PM A lovely journey that ends beautifully.

David Aaron November 22, 2015 at 1:08 AM Sheer beauty. I love the imagery.

Eric Boddie August 1, 2015 at 10:46 AM the Beauty unknown....here is truly shown....just follow the heart through paradise....then we may know the true value of Life....Beautifully done...;)

Joe Maverick June 14, 2015 at 3:22 PM Well written Sneha..'

Richard Lamoureux June 13, 2015 at 8:39 AM Congratulations, I didn't know the contest had been decided. This was an excellent choice.

Skat A June 12, 2015 at 7:46 PM Sneha, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT

Kim Merryman June 12, 2015 at 6:19 PM Wonderful imagery, Sneha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison June 12, 2015 at 3:18 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Hannington Mumo June 12, 2015 at 10:05 AM A short but well-thought-out piece. 7+

Paul Callus June 11, 2015 at 2:27 PM This is beautiful, Sneha! I love it! gl in the contest. // paul

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 8:15 AM Sneha you have such talent I am in awe of your wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 Sneha Rv June 11, 2015 at 9:53 AM Thank you SO much, dear Jan!! All the best oo!! :D :D

Casarah Nance June 11, 2015 at 7:28 AM Beautiful avatar too ! Sneha Rv June 11, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thanks a lot!! :D :D

Casarah Nance June 11, 2015 at 7:27 AM Beautiful! Your pen paints fabulous pictures when every words is colored so brightly! Hugs! Sneha Rv June 11, 2015 at 9:55 AM Thank you so much, dear Casarah!! So nice to see you again!! :D :D

Darlene Gifford June 11, 2015 at 7:05 AM Nice poem about nature. I can see the beauty there. ~~~Darlene Sneha Rv June 11, 2015 at 9:55 AM Thank you!! :D :D