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Tired waters push their way through rocks rocks hugged by rotting ivy's green green surrounds the wild forest's stream, stream flows calm, through places unknown... For Nette's 'Four lines only' Contest VISUAL 2 Posted 11/6/15 Syllable count checked

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Date: 10/7/2016 12:42:00 AM
Wow, I read it expecting something lovey-dovey and romantic like I love to write about...but instead found something of immense natural beauty. This was a good write, and only four lines -nice work! MC
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Date: 1/24/2016 3:13:00 PM
A lovely journey that ends beautifully.
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Date: 11/22/2015 1:08:00 AM
Sheer beauty. I love the imagery.
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:46:00 AM
the Beauty unknown....here is truly shown....just follow the heart through paradise....then we may know the true value of Life....Beautifully done...;)
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:50:00 PM
Very nicely written, Thank you for sharing... Tanya
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:22:00 PM
Well written Sneha..'
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations, I didn't know the contest had been decided. This was an excellent choice.
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:46:00 PM
Sneha, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2015 6:19:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Sneha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:18:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2015 10:05:00 AM
A short but well-thought-out piece. 7+
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:27:00 PM
This is beautiful, Sneha! I love it! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:15:00 AM
Sneha you have such talent I am in awe of your wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 6/11/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thank you SO much, dear Jan!! All the best oo!! :D :D
Date: 6/11/2015 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful avatar too !
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Sneha RV
Date: 6/11/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot!! :D :D
Date: 6/11/2015 7:27:00 AM
Beautiful! Your pen paints fabulous pictures when every words is colored so brightly! Hugs!
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Sneha RV
Date: 6/11/2015 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Casarah!! So nice to see you again!! :D :D
Date: 6/11/2015 7:05:00 AM
Nice poem about nature. I can see the beauty there. ~~~Darlene
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Date: 6/11/2015 9:55:00 AM
Thank you!! :D :D