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Unknown Beauty

Tired waters push their way through rocks
rocks hugged by rotting ivy's green
green surrounds the wild forest's stream,
stream flows calm, through places unknown...


11/6/15 
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Radhika Archana Date: 5/20/2023 11:24:00 PM lot of love from uk this sana you write perfect your age? Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 5/27/2023 5:53:00 AM hi, thanks so much. i am now 20 :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 10/7/2016 12:42:00 AM Wow, I read it expecting something lovey-dovey and romantic like I love to write about...but instead found something of immense natural beauty. This was a good write, and only four lines -nice work! MC Login to Reply

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 1/24/2016 3:13:00 PM A lovely journey that ends beautifully. Login to Reply

David Aaron Date: 11/22/2015 1:08:00 AM Sheer beauty. I love the imagery. Login to Reply

Eric Boddie Date: 8/1/2015 10:46:00 AM the Beauty unknown....here is truly shown....just follow the heart through paradise....then we may know the true value of Life....Beautifully done...;) Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 6/14/2015 3:22:00 PM Well written Sneha..' Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/13/2015 8:39:00 AM Congratulations, I didn't know the contest had been decided. This was an excellent choice. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/12/2015 7:46:00 PM Sneha, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/12/2015 6:19:00 PM Wonderful imagery, Sneha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2015 3:18:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Hannington Mumo Date: 6/12/2015 10:05:00 AM A short but well-thought-out piece. 7+ Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/11/2015 2:27:00 PM This is beautiful, Sneha! I love it! gl in the contest. // paul Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/11/2015 8:15:00 AM Sneha you have such talent I am in awe of your wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 6/11/2015 9:53:00 AM Thank you SO much, dear Jan!! All the best oo!! :D :D

Casarah Nance Date: 6/11/2015 7:28:00 AM Beautiful avatar too ! Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 6/11/2015 9:56:00 AM Thanks a lot!! :D :D

Casarah Nance Date: 6/11/2015 7:27:00 AM Beautiful! Your pen paints fabulous pictures when every words is colored so brightly! Hugs! Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 6/11/2015 9:55:00 AM Thank you so much, dear Casarah!! So nice to see you again!! :D :D

Darlene Gifford Date: 6/11/2015 7:05:00 AM Nice poem about nature. I can see the beauty there. ~~~Darlene Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 6/11/2015 9:55:00 AM Thank you!! :D :D