Unknown

I am unknown.
People see my smiling face and big, bright eyes. They wonder and watch, but do not 
see the sorrow that lies within me.
It is hard for a girl to see her friends move along when she falls behind. People 
don't understand how a girl who has seen a baby's first words and an old woman's 
last could wake up in the morning and fall asleep at night.
             She is alone, and I am unknown.
The secrets that I keep poisen the blood in my veins. Everyday a peice of me fades 
away and soon I shall no longer be. But still I wonder why the sky is blue, and still I 
dream that one day I shall have a name.
I cry when a heart is broken and shame the one who has brought pain. Life is long, 
tough, and unfair at times. But I hope one day to fully liveand be rid of my pain and 
sorrow. To be the girl people know me to be and finally to be called a name that 
does not bring pain.
Until that day I still remain.
              I am unknown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/4/2011 11:38:00 AM
Hey Amanada, wlocome to the soup. I know you and I just like to let you know, I love this poem and look forward to reading more. So get writing girlfriend :-)
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