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Unkempt

Dark desires unkempt, tease and taunt and tempt, so what is the source, of these cravings coarse? Pausing flow of thought, the Gordian knot loosens to reveal what we truly feel. What we seek is bliss, rapture of God's kiss but see not the light; pitiful’s our plight. Stooped is our soul's stance, so we take a chance, choosing staid silence, sans thought violence. If we're resolute, in time we reboot; call it eccentric, we are void centric. As we cease to sway, the false falls away, revealing our soul, tranquil, blissful, whole. With erst cravings gone, we’re here, now reborn, pristine like the snow, light without shadow. 02-November-2022 Writing Challenge - Unburden a ''U'' Word- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France
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Kauffman Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 2:08 PM
Seeker, your last two lines perfectly unify every verse that comes before it - "pristine like the snow...light without shadow." All the "unkempt" debris cleaned up and purified. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of bliss to you.
Seeker Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 5:26 PM
Thank you dear Sam
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
Seeker Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Sara
La France Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:19 AM
Seeker, a wonderful poem and I love your chosen image. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.
Seeker Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:42 AM
Thanks for hosting, Constance and for my placement. It’s always a pleasure to participate in your contests. V for Villanelle, I guess, verse is an option too. Will try to give it a shot!
George Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 8:39 PM
"As we cease to sway, the false falls away, revealing our soul, tranquil, blissful, whole." Each stanza is a gem, especially the one quoted above ! Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win, dear Seeker friend!
Seeker Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 3:52 AM
Thank you, Valsa, so happy you enjoyed
Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Ridding ourselves of unkempt thoughts and desires... we keep the kempt ones. (I can't believe no red line appeared under 'kempt.' Not too long ago 'kempt' was not considered a word). Thank you for your thought-provoking and evoking lines, Seeker.
Seeker Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, gw
Krutsinger Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:17 PM
"As we cease to sway, the false falls away, revealing our soul, tranquil, blissful, whole." Lovely!
Seeker Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Thank you, Caren
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Difficult to live near the presence of God. Yet we strive.
Seeker Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:30 AM
Why do you say that?
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