Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Personification

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" THE UNIVERSE " MY PHOTO, ©

 

Universe's Immensity

Oh divine universe ,

you,

that billions of years of light your diameter is,

in awe 

before your grandeur we stand, wondering:  

"How 

did the Lord,  your immensity,

within 

our mind's limits contained?"







© Demetrios Trifiatis
      02 March 2019

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2019 at 6:41 AM - A wonderful poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis March 4, 2019 at 1:35 AM Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Charlie Smith March 2, 2019 at 4:23 PM We do stand in awe and wonder, we’ll do my friend... Demetrios Trifiatis March 3, 2019 at 3:14 AM Yes, my friend, Charlie, we ought to unless some of us declare God themselves! Thank you so much!

Judy Ball March 2, 2019 at 1:07 PM Beautifully said my friend. I once heard it said that to try to understand God is like trying to empty the ocean with a teaspoon because His mystery and immenseness is so vast. As always your words are wonderful and your thoughts deep. God Bless, JB Demetrios Trifiatis March 3, 2019 at 3:15 AM Thank you so much for the visit , comment and the story, my friend, Judy! So gracious of you! Be blessed!

Sunlite Wanter March 2, 2019 at 11:32 AM Unanswerable, but immense are your words. By the way, the picture of the flower of swirls is very appropriate. Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2019 at 12:00 PM How generous your comment and your appreciation for the flower! Thank you dear, Sunlite!

Vijay Pandit March 2, 2019 at 7:12 AM Yes--it is beyond human comprehension..well said my friend. Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2019 at 11:59 AM Thank you for taking the time to visit and comment dear, Vijay!

Caren Krutsinger March 2, 2019 at 5:36 AM Demetrios, the words were cosmically outstandingly extra monstrosity-feeling-expanded-beyond-limits. But then you added a particular way of typing that made this poem FEEL like the infinite largeness of this galaxy and the next one. Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2019 at 5:44 AM What a wondrous comment full of understanding and insight dearest, Caren! Thank you!

Tom Cunningham March 2, 2019 at 5:01 AM I dont think that our minds can actually comprehend the vastness' of Gods creation Demetrios. Tom. Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2019 at 5:07 AM My friend, Tom, I am sorry but you seem to miss the point: I do not say that Man can actually understand universe's immensity but I say that God contained the immensity of the universe in our mind of which we use no more than 5% of it! Forget not that to God nothing is impossible! Thank you!