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"Darkness will be preferred to light, and death will be thought more profitable than life; no one will raise his eyes to heaven; the pious will be deemed insane, and the impious wise; the madman will be thought a brave man, and the wicked will be esteemed as good." -The Prophecy of Thoth
Unwavering promise veiled lengthy devotion,  Unveiling the eyes amid his universe’s notion.  Unlacing the heavenly brightness of the sky, Up is taken inside a magnificent nirvana fly. Undeniably, we are only a mass of molecules.  All are formed of atoms that follow the rules.  Each atom in these mites emitted an energy wave.  These sway waves are like those in the coral cave. Unarguably, it covers the crux of reality, Only energy creates a split personality.  The higher self is the same for everyone.  You and me are the same under the sun. It drifted away from our world: the universe,  defining the darkness of our primal curse.  The countless orbs will doubtless collide.  These natural laws cannot be denied. How vast and deep is this boundless sea?  How dreadful is the length that would be?  It’s a site where nice trends may be in motion.  Massive explosions and planetary interaction Our ubiquitous spirit opens and ends in us alone, Our grace makes waves of the right tone.  Always stay in touch, since God is a paradise.  He is Alpha and Omega, and must apply his device. Under the dark, there is a flow of darkness, What we do, leaves a mark, even in blackness.  This is like a shadow that vanishes without bliss, Overcoming bias and approaching the abyss. The truth may put one’s mind at ease, hearing the dramatic cosmic history of seas.  Only a tad of the cosmos, we are worthless.  We must relate this to the mood of purpose. Written: November 1St, 2022 Writing Challenge - Unburden a ''U'' Word- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/17/2022 1:12:00 AM
Creative lines in this winner. Congratulations on placing in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2022 6:35:00 AM
Sotto, a wonderful poem. I love the video, image and quote also. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.
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Date: 11/3/2022 11:14:00 AM
The "U's" have it! Undeniably "U" unburden the "ubiquitous" in the union of body and soul in the Alpha and Omega, Lasaad. Utterly delightful. Beautifully crafted. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of "undeniable," "uplifting" joy to "U."
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Date: 11/2/2022 5:08:00 PM
A masterfully crafted deep poem, my dearest friend, Lasaad. A joy to read. Good luck! Blessings!
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:46:00 AM
In your hands everything is so easy ! You bring out poems as hot cakes.... ! A poem so profound. Great entry for the contest . All the best !
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Date: 11/2/2022 5:56:00 AM
Much depth you convey in this discourse, Lasaad. Best to you.
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Date: 11/2/2022 2:34:00 AM
A difficult contest. Seems every line should start with a word that begins in U. And I don't know if more u's are needed. You did your best. Definitely, emotions abound in this poem.
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:35:00 PM
Yes, the universe is majestic and mysterious, this is glorious, best wishes for the contest~
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