Universal Conclusions

Since space can expand
faster than light’s speed,
galaxies beyond
must be infinite. . . 
I am overwhelmed.

We and Big Bang
are just small beans
in the whole scheme
of everything!

Alpha and
Omega. . . 
what are they?

No one
but God. . . 

knows.

For Rick Parise's  Contest:
The Universe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/1/2012 5:13:00 AM
wonderful poem, with the added aspect of the big question. wow. harry
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:29:00 PM
Amazing piece, Andrea - no wonder this was a winner : )
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Date: 10/25/2010 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:09:00 PM
We should be overwhelmed by the vastness of space. The beginning and the end only known by God. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/27/2010 7:39:00 AM
sent you soupmail-- thanks....
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Date: 9/23/2010 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations to you Andrea on your HM, regards..rinki.
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:29:00 PM
There have only been 3 or 4 different "takes" on this topic & you sure did a good oneenjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful write, Andrea
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:14:00 AM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:57:00 AM
I really like this! Congrats and haha nope I am not pulling a Chris ;) that was technically just 3 senryu but when he's on a roll, dishes out his like rice or paper towels or something (ugh my mind's flitting about so bear with my similes) & that siren senryu was all done in fun haha I believe you were the one who started calling Wilma siren right? hugs-- reply to your mail later--nikko :)
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:53:00 AM
love it, congrats on your HM
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:47:00 AM
Awesome congrats on your win in Rick's contest Andrea. Love Wilma you had some fun blogs so it was only a pleasure ;)
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:26:00 PM
Great write. many congratulations on this win Andrea.
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations on you HM in Rick's Contest, Andrea!! Enjoy it! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend... enjoy your honor tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2010 2:35:00 PM
Congrats Andrea..small beans..I love that..BG
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Date: 9/16/2010 1:34:00 PM
Congratulation's Andrea on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James
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Date: 9/16/2010 1:04:00 PM
Welcome to the winners' circle, Andrea, and congratulations on your placement! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:27:00 PM
An excellent use of this form! Love that it all comes down to only God knows. Beautifully done, best wishes, hugs, Kris
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Date: 9/12/2010 4:18:00 PM
Some things are beyond human understanding as you point out. Nice science fiction piece! Love Matthew Anish(MattCard)
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Date: 9/12/2010 9:29:00 AM
I totally agree! We are overwhelmed by a gargantuan experiment ongoing and compelling. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/12/2010 7:03:00 AM
Excellent!
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Date: 9/11/2010 9:27:00 PM
Hey Andrea, I'm probably not doing this right, but I'm trying to communicate with my tin can phone to the club members. What ever happened to 1 + 1 = 2
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Date: 9/11/2010 6:34:00 PM
Wise, talented, and accomplished ... treating complexity with simplicity. Thanks for reading poems. Trust you saw my answers above your question posed. All the best in the contest
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