Universal Conclusions

Since space can expand
faster than light’s speed,
galaxies beyond
must be infinite. . . 
I am overwhelmed.

We and Big Bang
are just small beans
in the whole scheme
of everything!

Alpha and
Omega. . . 
what are they?

No one
but God. . . 

knows.

For Rick Parise's  Contest:
The Universe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Horsman Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 5:13 AM
wonderful poem, with the added aspect of the big question. wow. harry
Horne Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Amazing piece, Andrea - no wonder this was a winner : )
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:09 PM
We should be overwhelmed by the vastness of space. The beginning and the end only known by God. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl
K. Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 7:39 AM
sent you soupmail-- thanks....
Nandy Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations to you Andrea on your HM, regards..rinki.
Guzzi Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 2:29 PM
There have only been 3 or 4 different "takes" on this topic & you sure did a good oneenjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful write, Andrea
Muzzey Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:14 AM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl
K. Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:57 AM
I really like this! Congrats and haha nope I am not pulling a Chris ;) that was technically just 3 senryu but when he's on a roll, dishes out his like rice or paper towels or something (ugh my mind's flitting about so bear with my similes) & that siren senryu was all done in fun haha I believe you were the one who started calling Wilma siren right? hugs-- reply to your mail later--nikko :)
Roberts Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:53 AM
love it, congrats on your HM
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 12:47 AM
Awesome congrats on your win in Rick's contest Andrea. Love Wilma you had some fun blogs so it was only a pleasure ;)
Mannan Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 10:26 PM
Great write. many congratulations on this win Andrea.
Haick Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on you HM in Rick's Contest, Andrea!! Enjoy it! Love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend... enjoy your honor tonight with luv..
Gorelick Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Congrats Andrea..small beans..I love that..BG
Fraser Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Congratulation's Andrea on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Welcome to the winners' circle, Andrea, and congratulations on your placement! Love, Carolyn
Walters Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 7:27 PM
An excellent use of this form! Love that it all comes down to only God knows. Beautifully done, best wishes, hugs, Kris
Anish Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Some things are beyond human understanding as you point out. Nice science fiction piece! Love Matthew Anish(MattCard)
Austin Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 9:29 AM
I totally agree! We are overwhelmed by a gargantuan experiment ongoing and compelling. Love, Dave
Palli Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Excellent!
Rasmusson Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 9:27 PM
Hey Andrea, I'm probably not doing this right, but I'm trying to communicate with my tin can phone to the club members. What ever happened to 1 + 1 = 2
Smalling Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Wise, talented, and accomplished ... treating complexity with simplicity. Thanks for reading poems. Trust you saw my answers above your question posed. All the best in the contest
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace