Unison

As accurate and intrinsic as the pattern of a spider web
I adorn myself with your presence
Connecting to each other
In a pattern of fine spun clarity
As our joining manifests the immaculate entanglement
Of love, time and energy interwoven one to the other
Between us
Together creating the juncture of our direction and art

My East is your West
My Sun is your Moon
My Stars are your Earth
My Life is your Life
Our fate is as one
Held in the heart of the other

Our walk is the rhythm of each opposite foot
Our dance is a waltz in arms enfolding as one
Our voices express melodic harmony in one song
Our words persuade to meld into each others

A composition of exquisite authorship



November 10, 2019
Love Is The Answer Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Lu Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/20/2019 11:31:00 AM
Very beautiful write Lonna, congrats on a fine win!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/21/2019 10:54:00 PM
Thank you so much John! Lonna
Date: 11/20/2019 7:42:00 AM
words are not enough to express how much this touched me...all I can say today...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/21/2019 10:54:00 PM
I am so incredibly happy that you liked it. Thank you for challenging my muse with this wonderful topic. Lonna
Date: 11/19/2019 10:46:00 PM
Hi Lonna congrats on your win
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/21/2019 10:56:00 PM
Thank you Gregory! Lonna
Date: 11/19/2019 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/21/2019 10:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Brenda! Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 4:51:00 AM
This is gorgeous; sure to spin Lu's head toward a "win" in her contest!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/13/2019 7:50:00 PM
Hi Caren. Always happy to hear from you with your great and kind comments. Lonna
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