Unintended Innuendo

“as we passed her she did wilt which caused in us sense of guilt since our stance perhaps did cause to put her heart’s joy on pause   though we’re gentle, not hostile we diminished her soul’s smile since our aura as she viewed scent of love did not exude” ~ Unseeking Seeker
As the blues of summer gently kiss the silk-threaded seams of her soul, she shivers at the breeze ~ so distant, lacking the love beats of celestial bliss... She ~ the iridescence of a Swarovski swan, glazed in amethyst aurora ~ a silent seer, fragile feeler of the unseen that drifts within the fickle iris of the phasing Luna. Her soul speaks: I am her ~ the one who wilts emotionally but never spiritually from the wistful touch of searing stillness; for intention, detached from intuition, compassion devoid of authentic vibration, like raining ashes and hailstones, a smile without warmth, a gesture that glides, shall stain the skin of glass ripples, engrossed in emeralds of empathy, perceiving the piercing threads within pensive twilight ~ frequency of flames flickering from the fairy-dusted wand of the empyrean, amidst the violet veil that hides the blinding darkness within fields of energy. In the presence of kind fate, tying the twinkling embers of constellations within the inner conscience, infused with guilty sparks shooting on impulse across neon neurons, like internal dialogues with words ~ unwritten, with thoughts ~ unsaid, there, I hear your unspoken apologies, and I forgive the scentless roses blooming in the backyard of your subconscious states, oblivious to the significance of zen and the harmonious ringing of complete composure… And in quiescence, when the cold contours within the cracked chambers of your heart ricochet in refrains, pushing me toward an aching abyss ~ I mirror the silver of frostbitten stars, lacking a sincere pulse of light and love, gentle, not hostile, placing a rune that drained the enlightened chakras… O sanctified star-clover fill my soul with mercy, incense the air with musks of clemency, let love be the music emanating meticulous melodies to illuminate the weathered, to soften the sorrow, to lift the heaviness from hanging horizons in mindfulness with devotions, an awakening to a magnetic meadow of magic, words woven with earnestness and realness… I forgive the innocent shift of energy flowing through silence like rivers of dried roses ~ for even the moon had to learn how to rise....
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Date: 5/22/2025 12:23:00 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your podium win, dear Ink, it's a great honor for me to share with you the podium. Blessings sent your way.
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Date: 5/15/2025 1:31:00 PM
IE, despite all the innuendo including "unspoken apologies" I like how you end with forgiveness for all that occurs. That is truly the recipe for enjoying the moment. We don't have to fixate on the past, but merely learn from it and let it teach us how to live in the present...even the moon needed to learn as you say. We need only find how to look at the past with some understanding of what happened and how to let it go as needed. Hope you are well. I sometimes feel like I repeat things. Smiles!
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Date: 5/12/2025 10:31:00 AM
My dearest poetess friend Ink, this is excellent and inventive. Your poetry delves into issues of emotional resilience, forgiveness, and the complex relationship between the individual and the cosmos. It considers the vulnerability of human emotions as well as the desire for greater knowledge and compassion in the face of adversity. The theme also includes sentiments of yearning, reflection, and the interplay of light and darkness inside one's soul. It depicts a journey of self-discovery and healing, highlighting the significance of purpose, empathy, and the transcendence of love. Best wishes for the tournament and many wonderful vibrations thrown your way.
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Date: 5/12/2025 6:59:00 AM
Dear Empress, I thought while reading that this is like a Swarovski swan-fragile, luminous, and impossibly graceful. O' the ache of energy unreturned and the silent forgiveness written through your lines moves me deeply. Yes, true empathy is both delicate and resilient, like amethyst aurora. Empress, oh, how your soul shimmers in words, for I feel seen, softened, and inspired by your light. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/11/2025 9:38:00 PM
Bravo. This poem speaks of wisdom of a thousand years. I truly felt the spirit of zen in your words. Noted: "I forgive the innocent shift of energy flowing through silence". A powerful theme.
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Date: 5/11/2025 12:22:00 PM
Showing mercy and clemency are sympathetic traits of caring, every bit as important as the scent of magnolia and rose blooms sweeten the air.
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Date: 5/11/2025 12:09:00 PM
Wow, Ink, Ink!! I loved all your beautiful imagery - "oblivious to the significance of zen and the harmonious ringing of complete composure…" that's really deep, ...." for even the moon had to learn how to rise" a breathtaking ending to this piece, Ink. <3 Going into my favs -
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Date: 5/11/2025 10:24:00 AM
Hello Ink, an excellent piece, beautifully written from the Soul. Always a pleasure reading your work. Wishing you a Blessed Sunday.
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Date: 5/11/2025 5:56:00 AM
"let love be the music emanating meticulous melodies .." I like that one. Hey, we're all learners, "for even the moon had to learn how to rise." Nice submission for the contest. Hope your Sunday is peaceful and painless
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Date: 5/11/2025 4:27:00 AM
I forgive the innocent shift of energy flowing through silence like rivers of dried roses ~ Felt this line …..
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Date: 5/11/2025 4:50:00 AM
Thank you dahlin!
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