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Seeker's Unintended Innuendo Contest
                   May 5, 2025

Line of inquiry: “as we passed her she did wilt which caused in us sense of guilt since our stance perhaps did cause to put her heart’s joy on pause though we’re gentle, not hostile we diminished her soul’s smile since our aura as she viewed scent of love did not exude” ~ Unseeking Seeker ****************** Are we perceived as hostile beings by flora that we tend in our gardens? If we intimidate petals of peonies each time we walk past their stems, we should make amends and ask for pardon. Is the pink tint of their blush mistrust of us? Withering zinnias and wilting wisteria! We wouldn't want to burden them with fear when we speak of how lovely they'd look in a crystal vase, set upon our parlor mantle. To ease their worry and not cause their tears, in our pockets, we don't carry pruning shears. We personify flowers as if they have feelings— but do our innuendos have that effect on people? We label shy ones as loners or 'wall flowers' who pull back, often going unnoticed for hours. Do some of us unintentionally cause that reaction? If this proves true, we need to take a moment to have in depth contemplative consciousness, a change in our stance and make an atonement if it's determined we're at fault— guilty. If so, our aura indeed has need of correction. One that shows us emanating a kinder reflection. The one who wilted as we passed by— was she the shrinking Violet we refused to see? Would we bring her heart joy if we paused and spoke to her with a gentle greeting? Words that would give the fragile one cause to not think of us as hostile and vile? If a kind word is spoken with a sincere smile wouldn't those greetings be worthwhile? It's plausible that we'd then have a pleasant scent, the treacly aroma of consideration and love. Time taken to say, 'hello' would've been well spent. Hold out a hand as a metaphorical invitation to dance. It might give a wallflower the confidence and the chance to stand tall and no longer cringe at being approached. If we've been at fault for diminishing the smile in souls, offer them emotional strength. Be someone who consoles.

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Date: 5/5/2025 2:22:00 PM
This is such a gentle and thoughtful reflection, Lin. The way you wove empathy into both flora and human connection is so beautifully done. I especially loved “We personify flowers as if they have feelings— but do our innuendos have that effect on people?” and “Hold out a hand as a metaphorical invitation to dance” — so profound. A fav for me : )
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/7/2025 3:07:00 AM
I'm delighted to read your gracious comments, Billie. Thank you for your kind words as well as for faving this one. ;-)
Date: 5/5/2025 9:43:00 AM
Lin, I'm in agreement with what Tom says! The way you personify the flowers and then talk about wall flowers might be a good way to get someone to think about how we all relate to each other. I think each of us can try to do better at observing and interacting with our environment. The whole planet is in dire need of the right kind of attention. I have to stop walking around with shears in my pocket! We all should metaphorically. Smiles!!
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Date: 5/5/2025 9:56:00 AM
Yes, please take them out of your pocket... you may end up cutting off one of your stems. ;-) I didn't know what to do with this theme but Seeker's line about wilting made me think of flowers, then wallflowers, so one led to the other. I'm never clear about what path Seeker wants entries to walk, but I know it'll always be a good one. Thanks so much for spending time reading me today.
Date: 5/5/2025 7:26:00 AM
So true Lin, the joy is in giving, it costs you nothing and can make someones day. Love your use of metaphors. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/5/2025 9:53:00 AM
I always open notice of a comment and expect to see your face, Tom. You know I'm grateful that you have encouraged and supported my poetry for years.

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