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She loved him like no other Feelings pure and intense Sending shivers of wonder Ardor came to her defense She wore a smile with him Sensing his gentle warmth Holding each other on a whim With kindness that performs She felt like she was floating Soft feelings she could express On him she was always doting For him, she wished to impress She often whispered enchantment Sweet kindness that fulfilled It felt just like she was dancing Romance like this simply thrilled She reached deep into her heart And felt the fluttering there Nothing could tear them apart Her spirit sent up her prayer She knew love like this survives All the best and worst in life Together, two hearts that compromise To overcome all that brings strife She fluttered her colored wings Against his touch that would magnify The sweetness of a love that brings Joys as uninhibited as a butterfly October 1, 2019 Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode

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Date: 10/8/2019 7:40:00 PM
Gina congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and your image is beautiful!
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Date: 10/6/2019 11:51:00 AM
- Lovely described, Regina ... congratulations on a great win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful write Regina, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/5/2019 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Regina! :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 9:57:00 PM
Wow. You take a challenge serious. I loved it... Cheering over here...in case you are far... and can not clearly hear... more cheering... Ann
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Date: 10/4/2019 1:56:00 AM
Exquisitely written, Regina. Bravo! Trixie and I are both clapping for you!
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Date: 10/2/2019 11:37:00 AM
This is a gorgeous piece of writing, Regina, and I love the different moments in which you preciously enfold the theme of the butterfly <3 a fav
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Date: 10/2/2019 9:12:00 AM
How beautifully romantic. I adore this :-) x
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Date: 10/1/2019 3:03:00 PM
this reminds me of a few stories I have heard where spirits visit the ones still alive on earth by using the form of a butterfly. Very nice, Regina
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Date: 10/1/2019 1:28:00 PM
One of your very best, Fegina! Adored it, Image is terrific. Love, Panagiota
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:41:00 AM
beautiful penning my friend, it floats, gracefully like a butterfly...good luck in the contest... :) hugs
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Date: 10/1/2019 9:02:00 AM
perfect rhythm and rhyme, she will love this dear lady :) Good luck, it's beautiful :)-luloo
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:23:00 AM
Beautifully done Regina. This poem felt soft to read, as if watching a butterfly floating carefree on a spring day. Best wishes in the contest
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