Uniformity a Freed Verse
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
UNIFORMITY
a
romantic
wondering
in enchanted
impressions
such
remote sounding such
breath
an unmissable
sight
resisting
translation
this
curious feeling
absorbed
painstakingly
in
matching
run of the mill
fictions
with
a
startling
alternate
as
singular
abstracts
of
stillness
in a setting
of the ordinary
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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